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Subject: [jbovlaste] Re: Esther Chapter 2
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On Mon, Oct 12, 2009 at 2:45 PM, A. PIEKARSKI <totus@rogers.com> wrote:
> Please comment:
>
> 1) {dzelanzu}
>
> l1 is the lineage/ancestry of d2 according to standard l3.
>

   l1 is the lineage/ancestry of l2=d2 according to standard l3

> 2) {ciblrmoru}
> x1 is myrrh.

  Since wikipedia says it can be derived from more than one species,
I'd add "...from source x2"

>
> 3) {speme'a}
>
> m1=s1 is a concubine, with lower rank than m2 by the amount of m4 ranks, belonging to s2 under tradition s3.
>

  No.  I have it me'aspe, not speme'a (as you have here)  for a
reason.  I think the important thing is that it's a wife, not that
it's a lesser thing.

  m1=s1 is a concubine/lesser spouse of s2 under law/custom/convetion s3

  (btw, I was pretty proud of this lujvo, as I was of nu'ogle,
currently the only lujvo using "nu'o")

> 4) {vroloi]
>
>  l1 is the threshold/doorsill of doorway/gateway l2 between v2 and v3 of structure v4.
>

  ...l2=v1....

> gloss: theshold; doorstep or doorsill
>
> 5) {vrokoi}
>
> k1 is the threshold of k2=v2 crossed from k3=v3.
>
> gloss: theshold; space or plane enclosed by doorway
>

  mmm....I'd think of it more as:
k1=v1 is the threshhold defining the boundary between k2=v2 and k3=v3
in structure v4

            --gejyspa