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ki'e .arpis.

I chose su'u instead of du'u as su'u should be used in cases when the 
beginner is unsure whether to use nu or du'u. So this is the case :-)
Also I tried to get rid of lujvo replacing them with corresponding tanru and 
place tags (but you said that they were better here).

Do you confirm my translation as grammatically correct ?

Anyway jbofanva has only few posts. Is it dead or ? That's why I posted 
here.

Please check the translation of one more song so that I won't create a new 
topic.
It's Russian song about an island called Choonga-Changa.

In this case I tried to create rhymes in exchange of losing some sense. 
Although there is not much sense at all in the original.

Just check my grammar please.
In my translation the island is called "la .tcangas."

.i doi .tcangas.
blanu tsani vi
.i doi .tcangas.
cimni criso .ui
.i doi .tcangas.
gleki xabju ki
.i doi .tcangas.
mi'a sanga ti

.i ti daplu tai le gapru
.i lo lifri ku ka zifre
.i lo lifri ku ka zifre
.i doi .tcangas.

. i nu gleki lo ro vitke
. i temcimni narge citka
.i temcimni badna citka
.i doi .tcangas.

.i doi .tcangas.
xamgu stuzi .ua
.i doi .tcangas.
mi'a surla ca
.i doi .tcangas.
.i ko troci ti
.i doi .tcangas.
mi'a kelci vi

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ki'e .arpis.<div><br></div><div>I chose su'u instead of du'u as su'u should=
 be used in cases when the beginner is unsure whether to use nu or du'u. So=
 this is the case :-)</div><div>Also I tried to get rid of lujvo replacing =
them with corresponding tanru and place tags (but you said that they were b=
etter here).</div><div><br></div><div>Do you confirm my translation as gram=
matically correct ?</div><div><br></div><div>Anyway jbofanva has only few p=
osts. Is it dead or ? That's why I posted here.</div><div><br></div><div>Pl=
ease check the translation of one more song so that I won't create a new to=
pic.</div><div>It's Russian song about an island called Choonga-Changa.</di=
v><div><br></div><div>In this case I tried to create rhymes in exchange of =
losing some sense. Although there is not much sense at all in the original.=
</div><div><br></div><div>Just check my grammar please.</div><div>In my tra=
nslation the island is called "la .tcangas."</div><div><div><br></div><div>=
.i doi .tcangas.</div><div>blanu tsani vi</div><div>.i doi .tcangas.</div><=
div>cimni criso .ui</div><div>.i doi .tcangas.</div><div>gleki xabju ki</di=
v><div>.i doi .tcangas.</div><div>mi'a sanga ti</div><div><br></div><div>.i=
 ti daplu tai le gapru</div><div>.i lo lifri ku ka zifre</div><div>.i lo li=
fri ku ka zifre</div><div>.i doi .tcangas.</div><div><br></div><div>. i nu =
gleki lo ro vitke</div><div>. i temcimni narge citka</div><div>.i temcimni =
badna citka</div><div>.i doi .tcangas.</div><div><br></div><div>.i doi .tca=
ngas.</div><div>xamgu stuzi .ua</div><div>.i doi .tcangas.</div><div>mi'a s=
urla ca</div><div>.i doi .tcangas.</div><div>.i ko troci ti</div><div>.i do=
i .tcangas.</div><div>mi'a kelci vi</div></div>

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