>>> . >>> >> >> > VERSION 4 > > .u'i se janbe je > renvi .ije mi > se ke sakli marce fo > lo pamei xirma .ui > > se ke sakli marce > fo lo pamei xirma ku > .i mi klama fo lo > snime foldi .iu > > -- > You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups > "Lojban Beginners" group. > To view this discussion on the web visit > https://groups.google.com/d/msg/lojban-beginners/-/cD3qwuddeQoJ. > > To post to this group, send email to lojban-beginners@googlegroups.com. > To unsubscribe from this group, send email to > lojban-beginners+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. > For more options, visit this group at > http://groups.google.com/group/lojban-beginners?hl=en. > -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Lojban Beginners" group. To post to this group, send email to lojban-beginners@googlegroups.com. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to lojban-beginners+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/lojban-beginners?hl=en. --0015175dd9e2f017ec04b526d28d Content-Type: text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

On Wed, Dec 28, 2011 at= 12:30 AM, gleki <gleki.is.my.name@gmail.com> wrote:

On Tuesday, December 27, 2011 5:02:18 PM UTC+4, lincro wrote:

On Tue, Dec 27, 2011 at 4:34 AM, gleki <gleki.is...= @gmail.com> wrote:

On Monday, December 26, 2011 11:07:40 PM UTC+4, lincro wrote:
=A0 I would suggest that a = sleigh is not a sakli carce (a slippery/slipping cart) but a [te] skiji car= ce.

=A0 As to your question:
Is it really so ? If {je} binds all arguments if selbri then how can the ph= rase
7.6) melbi je cmalu nixli bo ckule
exist ?
Are melbi2 and cmalu2 now the same ?
As for selbri with different number of arguments they definitely don't = get extra arguments.

=A0 =A0There the= y are part of a tanru. =A0You in fact have no defined arguments at all, and= when you did have them, they would be the arguments for ckule, not those o= f melbi or cmalu.

So is it possible to say {.u&#= 39;i se janbe je vitno} ?

<= div>=A0 Certainly it's possible. =A0It means "<amusement> A = bell sound-and-permanent thing!" (although why you introduced =A0the i= dea of permanence into the song, I'm not sure. =A0Because of "...a= ll the way"? =A0If so, I'd suggest ".i ve'e janbe se / sa= nce.ije nu" (or ve'e->"vi'i" or "ze'e&qu= ot;)

May be {se janbe je renv= i} ?

=A0 =A0Survival really implies e= nduring some time of hardship/countering force. =A0If you are really marrie= d to the idea of using a brivla rather than tense, as I've suggested, a= nd wanting to imply simply something sustained/continuous, try ranji.=A0

=A0 =A0

=A0

=A0

Now I suggest more alternative translations.=

.u'i se janbe je
vitno .ije nu
mi se sakli ma= rce fo
lo pamei xirma ku

= =A0An event of =A0YOU being a sliding-surface type of =A0vehicle propelled = by a single horse? =A0Funny, you don't look it!

Oh, sorry= . Let it be

.u'i se janbe je
renvi .ije mi
se ke sakli marce fo
lo pamei xirma .ui

=A0 Yes, the meaning of the second =A0sentence w= orks better now.

=A0

.i se sakli marce
fo lo pamei xirma ku
= .i mi klama fo lo=A0

snime foldi .iu

=A0I think your meter isoff on this one, although your meani= ng is fine

=A0
=A0
=A0=A0

Is the meter off in {snim= e foldi .iu} ? There are 5 syllables as in the original.

=A0 No, I meant in line three. =A0The song= wants to stress the MA in "klama"

=A0

=

Or:
.u'i lo janbe ku
san= ce ca lo nu
mi =A0se sakli carce fi
lo pamei xirma ku

=A0 Sorry, same as before. =A0A bell is not a= sound.

=A0 You didn't like my suggestion of s= akli -> skiji?

I like it. I just don= 9;t know how to fit it in. .uu .u'i=A0

Ummm.. where's the problem? =A0Wher= e you have the word "sakli", substitute in "skiji". =A0= They have the exact same rhythm.

=A0

=A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0--gejyspa
= =A0

On = Sat, Dec 24, 2011 at 9:52 AM, ianek <jan...@gmail.c= om> wrote:

On 24 December 2011 14:53, gleki <gleki...@gmail.com> wrote: >
> On Saturday, December 24, 2011 4:16:41 PM UTC+4, ianek wrote:
>>
>>
>>
<= div> >> On 24 Gru, 12:10, gleki <glek...@gmail.com> wrote: >> > > Some notes:
>> > > * shouldn't it be {te tonga} or {se janbe}? The form= er is easier to
>> > > fit in the rhythm.
>> >
>> > I agree that in lojban the bell and the sound it emits are >> > interconnected.
>> > But just singing {janbe lo'e} is a bit strange.
>>
>> What would you achieve by {lo'e} here? I don't get it.
>
> I just mean that sound and bell meanings are in one gismu therefore in=
> lojban we can do with only one word as opposed to English.
> So {janbe lo'e} is {bell producing typical sound} as x2 of janbe i= s the
> sound so there is no need in tonga in such case.

<= /div>
You got it wrong. {lo'e} is a gadri, in the same sema'o a= s {lo} and
{le}. {lo'e janbe} is a typical bell, while {janbe lo'e} is no more=
grammatical than {janbe le}.
I suppose you wanted to use {zu'i}. (I haven't seen it used so far)=

>> {je} and its friends are deceitful. They bind all the arguments of=
>> connected selbri (I'm not sure what happens when they have dif= ferent
>> numbers of arguments). So when you say {janbe je vitno}, it implie= s
>> that the sound of bells and the property in which they're eter= nal is
>> the same thing, and I doubt you can pass sound as a property.
>>
> Is it really so ?

OK, sorry, it's an open question, as I was told some time ago. Bu= t
it's weird to me.
http://groups.google.com/gr= oup/lojban-beginners/browse_thread/thread/9f7cbbf17674= 3206

> Not considering this song what is your translation of the phrase {eter= nal
> sound produced by a bell} ?

I would translate it as {lo vitno sance be lo janbe} or {lo vitno se<= br> janbe} (or cimni instead of vitno? I don't know)

>
>> Also, I suggest changing the second half of the refrain to
>>
>> u'i se salcarce fi
>> lo pamei xirma ku
>>
>> Unless you like it less than your version, of course.
>>
>
> OK, now there are two authors. .ui.
> I'm sure there is a lot of room for improvement.
> Then in your version you can change the first {u'i} to {ni'o} = to avoid
> tautology

It's nice that you like it! {se salcarce} is quite a tongue twist= er
though, isn't it?

mu'o mi'e ianek

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VERSION 4

.u'i se janbe je

renvi .ije mi

se ke sakli marce fo

lo pamei xirma .ui

se ke sakli marce

fo lo pamei xirma ku

.i mi klama fo lo=A0

snime foldi .iu

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