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I only did the first sentence: I had to watch the video, write down the
English subtitle, and then translate that into Lojban. I'm sure our
translations are similar, this is only for comparison.

Clouds - mankind has been living in their hitherto innocuous shadow for
ages.
dilnu .i loi remna caba'o jmive ni'a lo ze'e na ckape go'i ctino ti'u za'u
cedra

On Fri, Mar 2, 2012 at 1:19 PM, iesk <pa.fae@gmx.de> wrote:

> coi lojbo
>
> I hope one way (for me) to learn Lojban is to try and use it. So, for
> my personal amusement, I tried to translate this clip (le te skina ku
> pendo): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3DVmW92vwNRWw (There are
> subtitles in English, among others.) The clip is quite nice. :)
>
> This is what I came up with (quite longwinded in comparison to the
> Esperanto original, btw):
>
> ---
> lo dilnu zo'u ca'o lo na'arki'o loi remna cu jmive bu'u lo dy. ctino
> noi ze'epu nalckape
>
> .i ku'i lo vindu gundi .a ke'unai lo nu ciplanli be bu'u lo mipri
> skegunku'a be lo fenki cu rinka lo nu morsi dilnu gunta
>
> ni'o fi'o ralju xe draci la roberton. kamarelen. ko lifri tu'a la
> roberton. kamarelen. .e le nonbandu tcadu .e le fenki skepre
>
> .i je go'i lo nu morsi dilnu gunta
> ---
>
> So, I guess there are several problems. First of all, I=92m not sure
> about the way I rendered the title. I have, of course, no idea about
> Lojbanistani conventions for film titles, and I don=92t know if this is
> elegant.
>
> Furthermore, the original has a strange causal (is it?) sentence: ~
> "Poisonous industry, experiments [=85] of a madman lead to blabla." The
> industry does not seem to have much to do with the experiments, but in
> Lojban I suspect you can=92t just enumerate without specifying the
> relation between those two causes. ".a ke'unai" is probably rubbish,
> though.
>
> Does the "fi'o" construction make sense?
>
> Oh, and I made up "na'arki'o" for "millennia" and "skegunku'a" for
> "laboratory"; not sure about those, neither.
>
> I=92d be glad to here comments and corrections. a'u ki'e
>
> (ta'o zoi gy subtitle gy se fanva fu ma)
>
> mu'o mi'e iesk
>
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I only did the first sentence: I had to watch the video, write down the Eng=
lish subtitle, and then translate that into Lojban. I&#39;m sure our transl=
ations are similar, this is only for comparison.<br><br>Clouds - mankind ha=
s been living in their hitherto innocuous shadow for ages.<br>
dilnu .i loi remna caba&#39;o jmive ni&#39;a lo ze&#39;e na ckape go&#39;i =
ctino ti&#39;u za&#39;u cedra<br><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Fri, Mar=
 2, 2012 at 1:19 PM, iesk <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:pa.fae@gm=
x.de">pa.fae@gmx.de</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">coi lojbo<br>
<br>
I hope one way (for me) to learn Lojban is to try and use it. So, for<br>
my personal amusement, I tried to translate this clip (le te skina ku<br>
pendo): <a href=3D"http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3DVmW92vwNRWw" target=3D"=
_blank">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3DVmW92vwNRWw</a> (There are<br>
subtitles in English, among others.) The clip is quite nice. :)<br>
<br>
This is what I came up with (quite longwinded in comparison to the<br>
Esperanto original, btw):<br>
<br>
---<br>
lo dilnu zo&#39;u ca&#39;o lo na&#39;arki&#39;o loi remna cu jmive bu&#39;u=
 lo dy. ctino<br>
noi ze&#39;epu nalckape<br>
<br>
.i ku&#39;i lo vindu gundi .a ke&#39;unai lo nu ciplanli be bu&#39;u lo mip=
ri<br>
skegunku&#39;a be lo fenki cu rinka lo nu morsi dilnu gunta<br>
<br>
ni&#39;o fi&#39;o ralju xe draci la roberton. kamarelen. ko lifri tu&#39;a =
la<br>
roberton. kamarelen. .e le nonbandu tcadu .e le fenki skepre<br>
<br>
.i je go&#39;i lo nu morsi dilnu gunta<br>
---<br>
<br>
So, I guess there are several problems. First of all, I=92m not sure<br>
about the way I rendered the title. I have, of course, no idea about<br>
Lojbanistani conventions for film titles, and I don=92t know if this is<br>
elegant.<br>
<br>
Furthermore, the original has a strange causal (is it?) sentence: ~<br>
&quot;Poisonous industry, experiments [=85] of a madman lead to blabla.&quo=
t; The<br>
industry does not seem to have much to do with the experiments, but in<br>
Lojban I suspect you can=92t just enumerate without specifying the<br>
relation between those two causes. &quot;.a ke&#39;unai&quot; is probably r=
ubbish,<br>
though.<br>
<br>
Does the &quot;fi&#39;o&quot; construction make sense?<br>
<br>
Oh, and I made up &quot;na&#39;arki&#39;o&quot; for &quot;millennia&quot; a=
nd &quot;skegunku&#39;a&quot; for<br>
&quot;laboratory&quot;; not sure about those, neither.<br>
<br>
I=92d be glad to here comments and corrections. a&#39;u ki&#39;e<br>
<br>
(ta&#39;o zoi gy subtitle gy se fanva fu ma)<br>
<br>
mu&#39;o mi&#39;e iesk<br>
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