What can we do ?

May be create alternative version of the pictures ?

On Sunday,= March 4, 2012 2:54:29 AM UTC+4, .asiz. wrote:

On 3 March 2012 19:23, Jonathan Jones <eyeonus@gmail.com> wrote:
&= gt; On Sat, Mar 3, 2012 at 10:45 AM, Felipe Gon=E7alves Assis
> <<= a href=3D"mailto:felipeg.assis@gmail.com" target=3D"_blank">felipeg.assis@g= mail.com> wrote:
>>
>> I suggest starting with
= >>
>> 2. mi me la .clalis.
>> 3. ta me la .djan.>> 4. zo .djan. cmene ta
>>
>> Why use SE right at= the beginning?
>>
> Two reasons: 1) It's a translation of "= My name is 'ceqli', which is {mi se
> cmene zo....|, not {mi me = la....|
> 2) In the original, the text in #2 and #4 are equivalent. = Parallelism is a
> useful feature in learning.
>
1) I value w= riting a good introductory text more than translating the original
faith= fully. I thought the idea was just to take advantage of the pictures...
= 2) I know parallelism is important. That is why I made 2 and 3 parallel.It is true, though, that pictures 2 and 4 are parallel.
>
>= >
>> Also, I recommend using the ti-series in place of the ko'a= -series.
>> Using the latter while pointing can cause so much conf= usion...
>>
>> In 12 we may do
>>
>> 12= . lo prenu cu zvati tu
>
>
> What? You do realize that in= 12, ko'i (or lo prenu) and tu are referring to
> different things? I= n this case, I'm using tu in place of {lo vu diklo}.
>
I unders= tand this. I made the remark precisely because {ko'i} should not be
repl= aced by {tu} in this sentence, but I still think that {ko'i}
should be a= voided.
On the other hand, in frames 3, 4, 7 and 9, where there is po= inting, the best
would be to use {ta} instead of {ko'a}/{ko'e}.
&g= t;>
>> Other suggestions:
>>
>> 17. doi .sam.= ta mo / sedyta'u (no regard for the original)
>> 18. ti sedyta'u = .i mi jgari lo sedyta'u lo xance .i mi xance jgari lo
>> sedyta'u<= br>>
>
> Yeah, I'm sticking with the translation that does h= ave regard for the
> original, but thanks.
>
Ok, but why?=

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