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.i la manti cu cusku di'e
> Also; another haiku.
>
> lo pa karce cu
> se na'e frili citka
> lo mlatu vau .ia

{se} only modifies the first thing on the right that constitutes a
valid selbri, which would be {na'e frili}. Thus, your haiku
accidentally means "Cars eat cats uneasily, I believe," which is even
funnier :) To fix this, you'd need to move the {se} directly before
{citka}. If meter weren't important, you could use a {ke} bracket like
this to make {se} scope over the whole tanru: {se ke na'e frili
citka}.

.i mi'e la tsani mu'o

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