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On Wednesday, January 9, 2013 8:35:59 AM UTC-6, tsani wrote:
>
> .i la manti cu cusku di'e 
> > Also; another haiku. 
> > 
> > lo pa karce cu 
> > se na'e frili citka 
> > lo mlatu vau .ia 
>
> {se} only modifies the first thing on the right that constitutes a 
> valid selbri, which would be {na'e frili}. Thus, your haiku 
> accidentally means "Cars eat cats uneasily, I believe," which is even 
> funnier :) To fix this, you'd need to move the {se} directly before 
> {citka}. If meter weren't important, you could use a {ke} bracket like 
> this to make {se} scope over the whole tanru: {se ke na'e frili 
> citka}. 
>
> .i mi'e la tsani mu'o 
>

mi lo nu ciska dei cu bilga lo su'u cilre fi la .lojban.
.i ki'e la tsani ku ciksi lo selvla be zo se
.i mi na'e djuno zo'e zo se

What I attempted to say:

I felt as though I should write this is Lojban for practice.
Thank you Tsani for pointing out the way se works.
I had no idea it worked like that. 

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On Wednesday, January 9, 2013 8:35:59 AM UTC-6, tsani wrote:<blockquote cla=
ss=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin: 0;margin-left: 0.8ex;border-left: 1px #=
ccc solid;padding-left: 1ex;">.i la manti cu cusku di'e
<br>&gt; Also; another haiku.
<br>&gt;
<br>&gt; lo pa karce cu
<br>&gt; se na'e frili citka
<br>&gt; lo mlatu vau .ia
<br>
<br>{se} only modifies the first thing on the right that constitutes a
<br>valid selbri, which would be {na'e frili}. Thus, your haiku
<br>accidentally means "Cars eat cats uneasily, I believe," which is even
<br>funnier :) To fix this, you'd need to move the {se} directly before
<br>{citka}. If meter weren't important, you could use a {ke} bracket like
<br>this to make {se} scope over the whole tanru: {se ke na'e frili
<br>citka}.
<br>
<br>.i mi'e la tsani mu'o
<br></blockquote><div><br>mi lo nu ciska dei cu bilga lo su'u cilre fi la .=
lojban.<br>.i ki'e la tsani ku ciksi lo selvla be zo se<br>.i mi na'e djuno=
 zo'e zo se<br><br>What I attempted to say:<br><br>I felt as though I shoul=
d write this is Lojban for practice.<br>Thank you Tsani for pointing out th=
e way se works.<br>I had no idea it worked like that. <br></div>

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