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I might make a recording of this story soon and turn it into a video 
that shows the Lojban text at the same time. For this, it would be good 
if la gejyspa could make sure there are no accidental mistakes in the text.

One such thing would be the last sentence:

.i ri pi'egre le canko gi'e bajra se ka'a lety. zdani di'o le cicricfoi 
ku gi'e nupre le za'i ba noroi cliva le cicricfoi

I think the {di'o} should attach to {le ty. zdani}, so it needs to be 
{le ty. zdani be do'i le cicricfoi} "his home in the jungle".

I could also take the liberty of correcting things myself, but then the 
danger is that I might "correct" things that the author did intend.

mu'o mi'e la selpa'i

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