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  You are correct that the last sentence should have a "be" (but not your
version which has "do'i" :-) ) I wonder why no one who has examined the
story up to now
has noticed (including me)?  Good catch.  I will change it.

          --gejyspa

On Tue, Mar 5, 2013 at 4:44 PM, selpa'i <m3o@plasmatix.com> wrote:

> I might make a recording of this story soon and turn it into a video that
> shows the Lojban text at the same time. For this, it would be good if la
> gejyspa could make sure there are no accidental mistakes in the text.
>
> One such thing would be the last sentence:
>
> .i ri pi'egre le canko gi'e bajra se ka'a lety. zdani di'o le cicricfoi ku
> gi'e nupre le za'i ba noroi cliva le cicricfoi
>
> I think the {di'o} should attach to {le ty. zdani}, so it needs to be {le
> ty. zdani be do'i le cicricfoi} "his home in the jungle".
>
> I could also take the liberty of correcting things myself, but then the
> danger is that I might "correct" things that the author did intend.
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> mu'o mi'e la selpa'i
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<div dir=3D"ltr">=A0 You are correct that the last sentence should have a &=
quot;be&quot; (but not your version which has &quot;do&#39;i&quot; :-) ) I =
wonder why no one who has examined the story up to now=A0<br>has noticed (i=
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<br></div><div>=A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 --gejyspa</div><div><br><div class=3D"gm=
ail_quote">On Tue, Mar 5, 2013 at 4:44 PM, selpa&#39;i <span dir=3D"ltr">&l=
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x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">I might make a recording of this story soon =
and turn it into a video that shows the Lojban text at the same time. For t=
his, it would be good if la gejyspa could make sure there are no accidental=
 mistakes in the text.<br>

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One such thing would be the last sentence:<br>
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.i ri pi&#39;egre le canko gi&#39;e bajra se ka&#39;a lety. zdani di&#39;o =
le cicricfoi ku gi&#39;e nupre le za&#39;i ba noroi cliva le cicricfoi<br>
<br>
I think the {di&#39;o} should attach to {le ty. zdani}, so it needs to be {=
le ty. zdani be do&#39;i le cicricfoi} &quot;his home in the jungle&quot;.<=
br>
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I could also take the liberty of correcting things myself, but then the dan=
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