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On 02/07/2015 21:14, Erik Natanael Gustafsson wrote:
> .i mi'o bajra mu'i lo xamgu be lo ricfoi
{bajra seva'u lo ricfoi} and {bajra mu'i tu'a lo ricfoi} are also 
possible options, but I like {mu'i lo xamgu be lo ricfoi}.
> .ijebo mi'o bajra mu'i lo ka
mukti-1 is usually a lonu, and not a loka, so I would use {mu'i lo nu} here.
> ro da na'e claxu lo ka smuni
>
> .i mi darsi lo nu pensi lo pa se peisku
I think "lo ka" is better than "lo nu" there, as the thinker is the same 
as the one who dares. (loka+selbri is similar to infinitives in English.)
> noi binxo lo spatrxorki di'o lo jamfu po'e mi
{po'e} is okay, but you could replace it with {be} here, to save one 
syllable. {lo jamfu be mi} = the foot/feet of me.

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