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co'e rodo

In an effort to learn a little more about tense and narrative, I wrote
a short paragraph about local events.  If someone would be so kind as
to comment on it, that would be great.

{la bardivuar. vi le mi zdani cu barja
.i pu za ki ku le vorme pe by. ze'u ba ganlo ki'u lo nu catra
.i lo pulji cu klama by. .ije ku'i noda .ianai viska node .ianai
.i kiku la montreal. snura tcadu 
.ije ku'i my. se nabmi lo relxilma'e zekri girzu}

jbofi'e seems to approve, although it doesn't even begin to address
the semantics...

kie'do

co'o

Andrew