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From: Adam COOPER <adamgarrigus@gmail.com>
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Subject: [lojban-beginners] Re: la umpti.dumptis.
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I would suggest changing the last line to 

la .umptis.dumptis. cu na kakne co zbasu

It's a little better prosodically. Note that you can put any number of
the sumti before the brivla.

Parsing questions, I find, are quite well answered by jbofi'e (or
jboski). I rely on it to parse text before posting it. If it's out of
date or otherwise flawed, one of the elders will say so.

fe'o .adam.