From nobody@digitalkingdom.org Sat Jun 17 07:14:00 2006 Received: with ECARTIS (v1.0.0; list lojban-beginners); Sat, 17 Jun 2006 07:14:01 -0700 (PDT) Received: from nobody by chain.digitalkingdom.org with local (Exim 4.62) (envelope-from ) id 1FrbYm-00061m-Pg for lojban-beginners-real@lojban.org; Sat, 17 Jun 2006 07:14:00 -0700 Received: from ug-out-1314.google.com ([66.249.92.170]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.62) (envelope-from ) id 1FrbYl-00061Z-UJ for lojban-beginners@lojban.org; Sat, 17 Jun 2006 07:14:00 -0700 Received: by ug-out-1314.google.com with SMTP id j40so242427ugd for ; Sat, 17 Jun 2006 07:14:00 -0700 (PDT) DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; q=dns; c=nofws; s=beta; d=gmail.com; h=received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:references; b=R4qZmzmz3OqZ83m83UyU+rxcF7FtAwoDhU4NsZP2cHmx2jn4R6dqE3jYDNRWUYKM+/dKkxYOMIhsxEz6JG30oL2PxgRWYPbnJ0L7sdzJpjwCt6azbhODpFXX/sjJpsYXLbjiQoSO1RyI6C1XRP1XIO7dW8mOdPZ5v9n7HXAsYDo= Received: by 10.78.69.7 with SMTP id r7mr1385184hua; Sat, 17 Jun 2006 07:13:59 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.78.13.6 with HTTP; Sat, 17 Jun 2006 07:13:59 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <2d3df92a0606170713g1b058bdbif84fd1b4d480a48@mail.gmail.com> Date: Sat, 17 Jun 2006 16:13:59 +0200 From: HeliodoR To: lojban-beginners@lojban.org Subject: [lojban-beginners] Re: le pelxu ni'ablo -- The Yellow Submarine In-Reply-To: <2d3df92a0606151021m7e11d651qa5f5b8e76641de9a@mail.gmail.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="----=_Part_13468_32205739.1150553639878" References: <2d3df92a0606150927y9f5a8cbve0b92326eb5a5117@mail.gmail.com> <200606151308.44267.phma@phma.optus.nu> <2d3df92a0606151021m7e11d651qa5f5b8e76641de9a@mail.gmail.com> X-Spam-Score: -1.2 (-) X-archive-position: 3273 X-Approved-By: exitconsole@gmail.com X-ecartis-version: Ecartis v1.0.0 Sender: lojban-beginners-bounce@lojban.org Errors-to: lojban-beginners-bounce@lojban.org X-original-sender: exitconsole@gmail.com Precedence: bulk Reply-to: lojban-beginners@lojban.org X-list: lojban-beginners ------=_Part_13468_32205739.1150553639878 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline Here's the lot, corrections have been made to the first two verses. di'e selme'e lu lo pelxu ni'ablo li'u lo mi co'armivytca cu se xabju lo blopre .i ri skicu le nunji'e pe lo ni'arblotu'a .i co'ablo fa'a la sol. vi lo xamsi poi crino .i xabju ni'a loi boxna vi le pelxu ni'ablo .i ro pendo cu selbloti .i za'u ri xabju lo jibni .i co'agi'e le bende .i ma'a ca friliji'e gi'e na cautcu zo'e .i tanbla .ije xascrino vi le pelxu ni'ablo Ambiguity pushed to the extreme in the penultimate line, but anyway, I couldn't come up with a better solution. I'm also a little uncertain about {za'u ri}. None of the linestarter {.i}'s is to be stressed! ------=_Part_13468_32205739.1150553639878 Content-Type: text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline
Here's the lot, corrections have been made to the
first two verses.
 
 
di'e selme'e lu
lo pelxu ni'ablo
li'u

lo mi co'armivytca
cu se xabju lo blopre
.i ri skicu le nunji'e
pe lo ni'arblotu'a

.i co'ablo fa'a la sol.
vi lo xamsi poi crino
.i xabju ni'a loi boxna
vi le pelxu ni'ablo

.i ro pendo cu selbloti
.i za'u ri xabju lo jibni
.i co'agi'e le bende

.i ma'a ca friliji'e
gi'e na cautcu zo'e
.i tanbla .ije xascrino
vi le pelxu ni'ablo
 
 
Ambiguity pushed to the extreme in the penultimate
line, but anyway, I couldn't come up with a better
solution. I'm also a little uncertain about {za'u ri}.
None of the linestarter {.i}'s is to be stressed!
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