From nobody@digitalkingdom.org Thu Apr 19 00:27:27 2007 Received: with ECARTIS (v1.0.0; list lojban-beginners); Thu, 19 Apr 2007 00:27:27 -0700 (PDT) Received: from nobody by chain.digitalkingdom.org with local (Exim 4.63) (envelope-from ) id 1HeR38-0007i1-2o for lojban-beginners-real@lojban.org; Thu, 19 Apr 2007 00:27:26 -0700 Received: from wr-out-0506.google.com ([64.233.184.224]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.63) (envelope-from ) id 1HeR32-0007hg-Hn for lojban-beginners@lojban.org; Thu, 19 Apr 2007 00:27:25 -0700 Received: by wr-out-0506.google.com with SMTP id 60so459567wri for ; Thu, 19 Apr 2007 00:27:18 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=YGrTQ1vgz42oQ0zCKerBZtLU3bu3QIDAeskjUyvkF1pads5mLJ2hRX6Ixt/iDYSubj5It0bQGph28xEIvlJF8WGzgUi390DVjOgb8TXldIYN2Ym9hkK3+tGDNJ6SAX0qfSeV9RI7HAbORW3fvt12Ne3Ad24XRrXjoR6qEfRt6tE= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=H/w7NpeQv0sO2KmYEH2LNpVtCg3pTUnwGznZnfuTuQKqi45+JLTglbxG/3jSy+d4qvmEqf9oroaR+UbhuU1UJKjoKrKTG41nbMPmC0vnwE5vtAIK32ac49nSSxabuWQEFaQF0HiqC+n8z5tevqEnTR+M7RqRVfjFURnYlwZ2TRE= Received: by 10.70.132.2 with SMTP id f2mr2768262wxd.1176967638035; Thu, 19 Apr 2007 00:27:18 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.100.14.9 with HTTP; Thu, 19 Apr 2007 00:27:17 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <537d06d00704190027j2ee1cfeg83b19b0eed08780e@mail.gmail.com> Date: Thu, 19 Apr 2007 09:27:17 +0200 From: "Philip Newton" To: lojban-beginners@lojban.org Subject: [lojban-beginners] Re: Please review # 001 In-Reply-To: <985942.86388.qm@web88011.mail.re2.yahoo.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline References: <985942.86388.qm@web88011.mail.re2.yahoo.com> X-Spam-Score: -2.5 X-Spam-Score-Int: -24 X-Spam-Bar: -- X-archive-position: 4306 X-ecartis-version: Ecartis v1.0.0 Sender: lojban-beginners-bounce@lojban.org Errors-to: lojban-beginners-bounce@lojban.org X-original-sender: philip.newton@gmail.com Precedence: bulk Reply-to: lojban-beginners@lojban.org X-list: lojban-beginners On 4/19/07, ANDREW PIEKARSKI wrote: > "In the morning, I drink coffee quickly as I have to go to my kid's school in order to meet his teacher." > > .i ti'u le cerni mi cu sutra pinxe lo ckafi ki'u mi bilga lenu klama le ckule pe le mi panzi tezu'e lenu penmi le ri ctuca You want {lenu} after {ki'u} in this case, otherwise {ki'u} governs only {mi} and then {bilga} is a syntax error. I like using extra gismu places in some cases rather than the loose connection with {pe}, so I'd probably change the last bit of your sentence to {le ckule be fo le panzi be mi tezu'e lenu penmi le ctuca be ri}. mu'o mi'e .filip. -- Philip Newton