From nobody@digitalkingdom.org Mon Apr 23 08:33:09 2007 Received: with ECARTIS (v1.0.0; list lojban-beginners); Mon, 23 Apr 2007 08:33:10 -0700 (PDT) Received: from nobody by chain.digitalkingdom.org with local (Exim 4.63) (envelope-from ) id 1Hg0XM-00087h-UW for lojban-beginners-real@lojban.org; Mon, 23 Apr 2007 08:33:09 -0700 Received: from mclmx.mail.saic.com ([149.8.64.10]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.63) (envelope-from ) id 1Hg0XH-00087S-CG for lojban-beginners@lojban.org; Mon, 23 Apr 2007 08:33:07 -0700 Received: from 0015-its-ieg01.mail.saic.com ([149.8.64.21] [149.8.64.21]) by mclmx.mail.saic.com id BT-MMP-51714 for lojban-beginners@lojban.org; Mon, 23 Apr 2007 11:32:47 -0400 Received: from 0015-its-exbh02.us.saic.com ([10.43.229.22]) by 0015-its-ieg01.mail.saic.com (SMSSMTP 4.0.5.66) with SMTP id M2007042311324719714 for ; Mon, 23 Apr 2007 11:32:47 -0400 Received: from 0456-its-exmp01.us.saic.com ([10.75.0.188]) by 0015-its-exbh02.us.saic.com with Microsoft SMTPSVC(6.0.3790.1830); Mon, 23 Apr 2007 11:32:47 -0400 X-MimeOLE: Produced By Microsoft Exchange V6.5 Content-class: urn:content-classes:message MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="----_=_NextPart_001_01C785BC.A51870E1" Subject: [lojban-beginners] Re: Please review #002 Date: Mon, 23 Apr 2007 11:32:47 -0400 Message-Id: <1189A858F8918F43BE3F9C7603C73FB4031E7CBC@0456-its-exmp01.us.saic.com> In-Reply-To: <12d58c160704201537j11281870l3e7f25da5a050234@mail.gmail.com> X-MS-Has-Attach: X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: Thread-Topic: [lojban-beginners] Re: Please review #002 Thread-Index: AceDnSKIx8wB3dXhQumMkp0bxTn7ygCHycYQ From: "Turniansky, Michael" To: X-OriginalArrivalTime: 23 Apr 2007 15:32:47.0894 (UTC) FILETIME=[A56AE360:01C785BC] X-Spam-Score: -2.5 X-Spam-Score-Int: -24 X-Spam-Bar: -- X-archive-position: 4373 X-ecartis-version: Ecartis v1.0.0 Sender: lojban-beginners-bounce@lojban.org Errors-to: lojban-beginners-bounce@lojban.org X-original-sender: MICHAEL.A.TURNIANSKY@saic.com Precedence: bulk Reply-to: lojban-beginners@lojban.org X-list: lojban-beginners This is a multi-part message in MIME format. ------_=_NextPart_001_01C785BC.A51870E1 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Komfo: On 4/20/07, Turniansky, Michael wrote:=20 _le_ mi mamta pu klama _tezu'e lo nu_ _te_ vecnu _loi_ plise ja najnimre jisra (or "loi jisra be plise ja najnimre") _ca le nu_ la .djeikob stali le zdani .i mi ba _te_ vecnu _loi_ jikru _ba'o le nu my xruti_ The parenthetical is missing a {lo}. Otherwise this is good. I would do a few things slightly differently, to wit: lo mamta be mi pu klama te zu'e lo nu terve'u lo jisra be lo plise ja najnimre ca lo nu la .djeikyb. stali lo zdani .i mi ba terve'u lo jikru ba'o lo nu lo go'i cu xrukla=20 I would suggest running every composition through jboski or jbofi'e. When I was a beginner, a few months of doing that completely cured me of "rookie" mistakes like missing {cu}, dropping abstractions, & the like.=20 mu'o mi'e komfo,amonan =20 If that was addressed to me, komfo,amonan, I usually do. I was particularly rushed on Friday, to get home. (As far as the rest goes, I wanted to change Andrew's existing words as little as possible) =20 --gejyspa =20 ------_=_NextPart_001_01C785BC.A51870E1 Content-Type: text/html; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

= Komfo:

On 4/20/07, Turniansky, Michael <MICHAEL.A.TURNIANSKY@saic.c= om> wrote:

_le_ mi mamta pu klama _tezu'e lo nu_ _te_ vecnu _loi_ plise ja najnimre
jisra (or "loi jisra be plise ja najnimre") _ca le nu_ la = .djeikob stali
le zdani .i mi ba _te_ vecnu _loi_ jikru _ba'o le nu my = xruti_

The parenthetical is missing a {lo}. Otherwise this is good. I would do = a few things slightly differently, to wit:

lo mamta be mi pu klama te zu'e lo nu terve'u lo jisra be lo plise ja = najnimre ca lo nu la .djeikyb. stali lo zdani .i mi ba terve'u lo jikru ba'o lo = nu lo go'i cu xrukla

I would suggest running every composition through jboski or jbofi'e. = When I was a beginner, a few months of doing that completely cured me of "rookie" mistakes like missing {cu}, dropping abstractions, = & the like.
mu'o mi'e komfo,amonan

=

= If that was addressed to me, komfo,amonan, I usually do. I was particularly rushed on Friday, = to get home. (As far as the rest goes, I wanted to change Andrew’s existing = words as little as possible)

= &= nbsp; --gejyspa

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