From nobody@digitalkingdom.org Mon Jun 04 00:16:52 2007 Received: with ECARTIS (v1.0.0; list lojban-beginners); Mon, 04 Jun 2007 00:16:53 -0700 (PDT) Received: from nobody by chain.digitalkingdom.org with local (Exim 4.63) (envelope-from ) id 1Hv6o6-0002Vp-SX for lojban-beginners-real@lojban.org; Mon, 04 Jun 2007 00:16:51 -0700 Received: from netscaler1.rice.edu ([128.42.205.5] helo=mh4.mail.rice.edu) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.63) (envelope-from ) id 1Hv6o2-0002Qa-VK; Mon, 04 Jun 2007 00:16:49 -0700 Received: from mh4.mail.rice.edu (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by mh4.mail.rice.edu (Postfix) with ESMTP id F19B088094; Mon, 4 Jun 2007 02:16:39 -0500 (CDT) X-Virus-Scanned: by amavis-2.4.4 at mh4.mail.rice.edu Received: from mh4.mail.rice.edu ([127.0.0.1]) by mh4.mail.rice.edu (mh4.mail.rice.edu [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 2N-D2HQVAyX8; Mon, 4 Jun 2007 02:16:39 -0500 (CDT) Received: from Starlight (c-24-18-203-65.hsd1.wa.comcast.net [24.18.203.65]) (using TLSv1 with cipher RC4-MD5 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by mh4.mail.rice.edu (Postfix) with ESMTP id EA01D880A2; Mon, 4 Jun 2007 02:16:38 -0500 (CDT) From: "Marjorie Scherf" To: , References: <1180908797.46633cfd69599@ssl0.ovh.net> <000c01c7a66c$cd72a570$0300a8c0@Starlight> Subject: [lojban-beginners] le tavla be fo le nalsmubau Date: Mon, 4 Jun 2007 00:15:12 -0700 Message-ID: <002301c7a678$17fc1030$0300a8c0@Starlight> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit In-Reply-To: <000c01c7a66c$cd72a570$0300a8c0@Starlight> Thread-Index: AcemQQYs71aFIWOmSiim56bChKgT+QAKvtPwAALWEPA= X-MimeOLE: Produced By Microsoft MimeOLE V6.00.2900.3028 X-Spam-Score: 1.0 X-Spam-Score-Int: 10 X-Spam-Bar: + X-archive-position: 4852 X-ecartis-version: Ecartis v1.0.0 Sender: lojban-beginners-bounce@lojban.org Errors-to: lojban-beginners-bounce@lojban.org X-original-sender: mls1@rice.edu Precedence: bulk Reply-to: lojban-beginners@lojban.org X-list: lojban-beginners coi rodo I started writing a story. I put it on the wiki so people can help me fix grammar and word choice. It is still being written, so the plot still has more pieces coming, but if you see any grammar or word choice issues which could be improved, please help! http://lojban.org/tiki/tiki-index.php?page=lo%20banli%20lisri%20pe%20mi .imu'omi'e .skaryzgik.