From nobody@digitalkingdom.org Thu Aug 07 00:56:06 2008 Received: with ECARTIS (v1.0.0; list lojban-beginners); Thu, 07 Aug 2008 00:56:07 -0700 (PDT) Received: from nobody by chain.digitalkingdom.org with local (Exim 4.69) (envelope-from ) id 1KR0Lu-0005kI-Jh for lojban-beginners-real@lojban.org; Thu, 07 Aug 2008 00:56:06 -0700 Received: from baal.anno.name ([92.51.131.125] helo=mail.anno.name) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.69) (envelope-from ) id 1KR0Lq-0005k4-GP for lojban-beginners@lojban.org; Thu, 07 Aug 2008 00:56:06 -0700 Received: from [192.168.178.24] (p579C2DD5.dip.t-dialin.net [87.156.45.213]) by mail.anno.name (Postfix) with ESMTPA id 8A5771E83C002 for ; Thu, 7 Aug 2008 09:56:00 +0200 (CEST) Message-ID: <489AAA88.9070800@perpetuum-immobile.de> Date: Thu, 07 Aug 2008 09:55:52 +0200 From: Timo Paulssen User-Agent: Mozilla-Thunderbird 2.0.0.14 (X11/20080509) MIME-Version: 1.0 To: lojban-beginners@lojban.org Subject: [lojban-beginners] Re: feedback please References: <489A4A6C.6090305@gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <489A4A6C.6090305@gmail.com> X-Enigmail-Version: 0.95.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="------------enig17A1B7B3A83ED5C49DE8E417" X-Spam-Score: 0.0 X-Spam-Score-Int: 0 X-Spam-Bar: / X-archive-position: 792 X-ecartis-version: Ecartis v1.0.0 Sender: lojban-beginners-bounce@lojban.org Errors-to: lojban-beginners-bounce@lojban.org X-original-sender: timonator@perpetuum-immobile.de Precedence: bulk Reply-to: lojban-beginners@lojban.org X-list: lojban-beginners This is an OpenPGP/MIME signed message (RFC 2440 and 3156) --------------enig17A1B7B3A83ED5C49DE8E417 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable peter hering wrote: > .i se fulta le cpina litki lo ba'e so'i morsi cinki This seems to mean, that the liquid floats on the dead flies. While this = could be a neat stylistic device (so many dead flies, that the liquid itself wa= s swimming in fly corpses), it seems like that wasn't intended. The cause f= or this is, that if you put no sumti before the selbri, the first sumti after it = is assigned into the x2 slot, which is the x1 slot of fulta. > .i mi kucli le si'o xu se cumki le nu mau re remyma'utei cu ka'e jmive = ne'i > le feska'e dakli In this case, for the si'o, a relative question would be more sensible to= me, which is easily accomplished by appending kau to the xu. I'm not sure, wether the word remyma'utei is appropriate here, as you don= 't talk about humans, but flies. The rest of the text seems absolutely fine to me after having read it onc= e ;) - Timo --------------enig17A1B7B3A83ED5C49DE8E417 Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name="signature.asc" Content-Description: OpenPGP digital signature Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="signature.asc" -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.9 (GNU/Linux) Comment: Using GnuPG with Mozilla - http://enigmail.mozdev.org iEYEARECAAYFAkiaqowACgkQus6NTCHpCECWTQCggdgqVsPTU7wUsdaa3DEoyV6J pW8An2X4lWozve36FfxTXjTWlNRs5shI =1ndp -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --------------enig17A1B7B3A83ED5C49DE8E417--