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From: Tom Gysel <to_mu1975@yahoo.com>
Subject: [lojban-beginners] Seizing my life 
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"Seizing my life in your hands,
you trashed it clean on the=20
savage rocks of Eternal Mind."
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A piece of a poem, which I translated as:
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do noi jgari le mi jmive le do xance
pu darxi fi jy. ja'e jy. cu jinsa
fe le cilce rokci po'e le cimni menli
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1.Is my translation grammatically correct?
2.Do I need 'ku'o' at the end of 'noi...'? Or does the 'pu' close off every=
thing ?
3.Anything else I could have done better, or more elegantly?=20
How would you have done it?
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Thanks,
Tom=0A=0A=0A      
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top" style=3D"font: inherit;"><DIV>"Seizing my life in your hands,</DIV>
<DIV>you trashed it clean on the </DIV>
<DIV>savage rocks of Eternal Mind."</DIV>
<DIV>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV>A piece of a poem, which I translated as:</DIV>
<DIV>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV>do noi jgari le mi jmive le do xance</DIV>
<DIV>pu darxi fi jy. ja'e jy. cu jinsa</DIV>
<DIV>fe le cilce rokci po'e le cimni menli</DIV>
<DIV>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV>1.Is my translation grammatically correct?</DIV>
<DIV>2.Do I need 'ku'o' at the end of 'noi...'? Or does the 'pu' close off =
everything ?</DIV>
<DIV>3.Anything else I could have done better, or more elegantly? </DIV>
<DIV>How would you have done it?</DIV>
<DIV>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV>Thanks,</DIV>
<DIV>Tom</DIV></td></tr></table><br>=0A=0A      
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