From nobody@digitalkingdom.org Wed Aug 09 19:29:56 2006 Received: with ECARTIS (v1.0.0; list lojban-beginners); Wed, 09 Aug 2006 19:29:56 -0700 (PDT) Received: from nobody by chain.digitalkingdom.org with local (Exim 4.62) (envelope-from ) id 1GB0J1-0000gw-TF for lojban-beginners-real@lojban.org; Wed, 09 Aug 2006 19:29:56 -0700 Received: from wx-out-0506.google.com ([66.249.82.232]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.62) (envelope-from ) id 1GB0J1-0000go-1h for lojban-beginners@lojban.org; Wed, 09 Aug 2006 19:29:55 -0700 Received: by wx-out-0506.google.com with SMTP id r21so363423wxc for ; Wed, 09 Aug 2006 19:29:53 -0700 (PDT) DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; q=dns; c=nofws; s=beta; d=gmail.com; h=received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition; b=PPTpyO/Vo8ky9kAkQYPLUZDOfiDKBBixwX4w+uWX1SH/YagQuEX4f/ZSee/EiKfblj+tFw3x79bvLZRVa6xH+3+64sr3pMSgmhyDwCMfdJ+pd3eicv8Bv1qmRUnHerloMN2eoyd4epbWsVz20Hk9Cwp3KbRKBB2g1DQ0FQRHsUw= Received: by 10.78.156.6 with SMTP id d6mr957640hue; Wed, 09 Aug 2006 19:29:53 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.78.159.4 with HTTP; Wed, 9 Aug 2006 19:29:53 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: Date: Wed, 9 Aug 2006 21:29:53 -0500 From: "Matt Arnold" To: lojban-list@lojban.org, lojban-beginners@lojban.org Subject: [lojban-beginners] Elephants Dream first draft MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline X-Spam-Score: -2.2 (--) X-archive-position: 3484 X-ecartis-version: Ecartis v1.0.0 Sender: lojban-beginners-bounce@lojban.org Errors-to: lojban-beginners-bounce@lojban.org X-original-sender: matt.mattarn@gmail.com Precedence: bulk Reply-to: lojban-beginners@lojban.org X-list: lojban-beginners Here is the first draft of my translation of the dialogue from the short film Elephants Dream. http://www.lojban.org/tiki/tiki-index.php?page=elephants+dream Would someone proofread it for me and offer suggestions? -epkat