From nobody@digitalkingdom.org Wed Mar 04 01:14:46 2009 Received: with ECARTIS (v1.0.0; list lojban-beginners); Wed, 04 Mar 2009 01:14:46 -0800 (PST) Received: from nobody by chain.digitalkingdom.org with local (Exim 4.69) (envelope-from ) id 1LenBe-00021i-22 for lojban-beginners-real@lojban.org; Wed, 04 Mar 2009 01:14:46 -0800 Received: from yw-out-1718.google.com ([74.125.46.154]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.69) (envelope-from ) id 1LenBb-00021W-Me for lojban-beginners@lojban.org; Wed, 04 Mar 2009 01:14:46 -0800 Received: by yw-out-1718.google.com with SMTP id 4so1947973ywq.46 for ; Wed, 04 Mar 2009 01:14:42 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:mime-version:received:in-reply-to:references :date:message-id:subject:from:to:content-type :content-transfer-encoding; bh=AwRBgtddLe1E+/g8MCwzGypCz+ClNeKzqN4pi7eW06U=; b=n0XL4LQOT7CPu+s7SE6O1sJXRDjaSOh1CTKVRJbQSvjh1fDNFlYgRiXUg0/PDFZ8Tk Ac8xSOYcEkMMb1nqSXd8xo6gIxRBfa8JgtOMZiNKpy11RO8yX98bYxeEIeZhj7mZzO3e Nu0ELVZZatwMJ0UjVu8+ZpEgfhzvxkTOVlaak= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject:from:to :content-type:content-transfer-encoding; b=nGNDLapD3+I+fzjweqsKFnK9oD5cQK7OUAWQNBBczYlSwoQFpT0zezXTcTp+3HGKy8 AoT+tyfyo0tMSyTmwHXv/+6V9VX89CHkCjLuoFikfj9ZCbYdaS7zXyw83QWVeeENWyfS zLToRv+MGJiqFtTA/93H0Lo7IvTOl5cbsF48k= MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.100.196.17 with SMTP id t17mr1218347anf.84.1236158082620; Wed, 04 Mar 2009 01:14:42 -0800 (PST) In-Reply-To: <5a3750120903032327v653fd950u7ae2bbfa787d11d7@mail.gmail.com> References: <20090302231357.GF25033@sunflowerriver.org> <425e4ac20903032110xe9e5e8cy2853275e40383813@mail.gmail.com> <5a3750120903032327v653fd950u7ae2bbfa787d11d7@mail.gmail.com> Date: Wed, 4 Mar 2009 04:14:42 -0500 Message-ID: <425e4ac20903040114q5f7c87cfibc2207199b083ee3@mail.gmail.com> Subject: [lojban-beginners] Re: grammar check for my first few sentences From: Stela Selckiku To: lojban-beginners@lojban.org Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Spam-Score: 0.0 X-Spam-Score-Int: 0 X-Spam-Bar: / X-archive-position: 1383 X-ecartis-version: Ecartis v1.0.0 Sender: lojban-beginners-bounce@lojban.org Errors-to: lojban-beginners-bounce@lojban.org X-original-sender: selckiku@gmail.com Precedence: bulk Reply-to: lojban-beginners@lojban.org X-list: lojban-beginners On Wed, Mar 4, 2009 at 2:27 AM, Oleksii Melnyk wrote: >>lo nu la .lojban. zenba lo ka ricfu ba jalge loi nu do pilno > > xu so'o zo kei poi lidne zo ba cu drani zo'e di'u lo gerna be la lojban. .i .a'o mi fi lo do preti cu jimpe (Hopefully I understand your question.) .i .ia drani gi'e ku'i na'e sarcu (I believe correct, but not necessary.) lo nu la .lojban. zenba lo ka ricfu [kei kei cu] ba jalge loi nu do pilno [fa] lo nu [fa] la .lojban. [ku cu] zenba [fe] lo ka [ce'u cu] ricfu [vau kei ku vau kei ku cu (all implied by this "ba", which has to start a selbri (because it's followed by brivla and not a gadri), and both of the previous abstractions have selbri, "ricfu" and then going out further "zenba")] ba jalge [fe] loi nu [fa] do [cu] pilno [vau kei ku vau] OK wait maybe a tree structure?! [fa] lo nu [fa] la .lojban. [cu] zenba [fe] lo ka [ce'u cu] ricfu [vau kei ku vau kei ku] [cu] ba jalge [fe] loi nu [fa] do [cu] pilno [vau kei ku vau] mu'o te preti mi'e selkik