From nobody@digitalkingdom.org Wed Mar 18 17:07:04 2009 Received: with ECARTIS (v1.0.0; list lojban-beginners); Wed, 18 Mar 2009 17:07:04 -0700 (PDT) Received: from nobody by chain.digitalkingdom.org with local (Exim 4.69) (envelope-from ) id 1Lk5mp-0003sL-NL for lojban-beginners-real@lojban.org; Wed, 18 Mar 2009 17:07:04 -0700 Received: from mx-8.zoominternet.net ([24.154.1.27] helo=cm-2.zoominternet.net) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.69) (envelope-from ) id 1Lk5ml-0003ru-8I for lojban-beginners@lojban.org; Wed, 18 Mar 2009 17:07:03 -0700 X-SpamGroup: 2000 X-CM-Cat: Undefined:Undefined X-CNFS-Analysis: v=1.0 c=1 a=YIDOIVD-fD8A:10 a=FgkCMfv82XIA:10 a=yL5XVgb8E2+fLTqkepJTkw==:17 a=Lal0q3wtAAAA:8 a=DDcSKc2wImCC2hRgEjoA:9 a=xX_R1XhOYyeQmYajbfnMUfwVCMYA:4 a=CWfAmLVWKswA:10 X-CM-Score: 0 X-Scanned-by: Cloudmark Authority Engine Received: from [24.154.1.46] ([24.154.1.46:58154] helo=pop-3.zoominternet.net) by mx-8.zoominternet.net (envelope-from ) (ecelerity 2.2.2.30 r(24168)) with ESMTP id 8B/6C-04759-D9C81C94; Wed, 18 Mar 2009 20:06:53 -0400 Received: (qmail 1501 invoked from network); 19 Mar 2009 00:06:54 -0000 Received: from unknown (HELO [192.168.1.100]) ([24.154.82.11]) (envelope-sender ) by pop-3.zoominternet.net (qmail-ldap-1.03) with SMTP for ; 19 Mar 2009 00:06:54 -0000 Message-Id: <97CB84D1-CDB8-4562-859C-78602F3386CC@zoominternet.net> From: Robert Baruch To: lojban-beginners@lojban.org In-Reply-To: <96f789a60903181334w6e20c201o26221de99fb74188@mail.gmail.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII; format=flowed; delsp=yes Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Mime-Version: 1.0 (Apple Message framework v930.3) Subject: [lojban-beginners] Re: Preliminary chapter 1 for Lojban learners Date: Wed, 18 Mar 2009 20:06:57 -0400 References: <925d17560903180544o4d023061u72b410b5bf73bc31@mail.gmail.com> <96f789a60903180559m16c4b85cyedfdfe9a59db4153@mail.gmail.com> <200903180935.55023.phma@phma.optus.nu> <96f789a60903181059m510b1519lfcc65433c20749a9@mail.gmail.com> <925d17560903181140i74d80fd5r47875ad4e4b13c56@mail.gmail.com> <96f789a60903181334w6e20c201o26221de99fb74188@mail.gmail.com> X-Spam-Score: -1.0 X-Spam-Score-Int: -9 X-Spam-Bar: - X-archive-position: 1451 X-ecartis-version: Ecartis v1.0.0 Sender: lojban-beginners-bounce@lojban.org Errors-to: lojban-beginners-bounce@lojban.org X-original-sender: autophile@zoominternet.net Precedence: bulk Reply-to: lojban-beginners@lojban.org X-list: lojban-beginners I've put up the next version of the chapter here: http://www.scribd.com/doc/13404260/lojban1 I sort of side-stepped the whole stress on names issue, in the interests of keeping it simple. I also re-did the names, and added many more sentences. Can anyone spot any errors? Thanks! la rab,rt.