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Date: Thu, 16 Aug 2012 17:05:19 +0200
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Subject: Re: [lojban] Re: lo selsanga pe la'o dy. Bodo Wartke .dy zi'e po'u
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coi do

On Thu, Aug 16, 2012 at 02:53:22PM +0200, Paul Predkiewicz wrote:
> Sorry to interrupt in english, but my lojban is only as good as to
> understand this is about the song Liebeslied from Bodo Wartke and that you
> have come up with a verse already, [...]

No problem at all, I started to learn Lojban only recently.
It takes me a lot of time to write mails in lojban.

> but cant find the gismu rimni or the
> rafsi rim anywhere here. I just wanted to say that bodo has also provided=
 a
> blueprint for the rhyming.
>=20
> i.e.:
> Ich will's in allen Sprachen f=C3=BCr dich singen(a),
> auf allen Instrumenten zum Erklingen(a) bringen(a).
> Ich(b)   [kinda long pause]
> liebe dich(b).
>=20
> in which (a) is the first rhymeword,
> (a)(a) two words which rhyme on the first rhymeword,
> (b) is the second rhymeword and again
> (b) a word that rhymes on the second rhymeword.

He also mentions that variations from this scheme are possible.
I wrote earlier that my translation was only a first attempt,
but iesk found this older translation {ti'e} by Alex Koch
and this one is quite nice, though I think it's a little bit lengthy.


v4hn

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