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Well i think if you could omit the {lu tu'e} in the beginning and the {tu'u
li'u} in the end, it might work quite well.
though the second line needs to contain another two or three silable word,
or else the timing won't fit so nicely...
best would be one ending in an "gu" or "ku"

2012/8/16 v4hn <me@v4hn.de>

> coi do
>
> On Thu, Aug 16, 2012 at 02:53:22PM +0200, Paul Predkiewicz wrote:
> > Sorry to interrupt in english, but my lojban is only as good as to
> > understand this is about the song Liebeslied from Bodo Wartke and that
> you
> > have come up with a verse already, [...]
>
> No problem at all, I started to learn Lojban only recently.
> It takes me a lot of time to write mails in lojban.
>
> > but cant find the gismu rimni or the
> > rafsi rim anywhere here. I just wanted to say that bodo has also
> provided a
> > blueprint for the rhyming.
> >
> > i.e.:
> > Ich will's in allen Sprachen f=FCr dich singen(a),
> > auf allen Instrumenten zum Erklingen(a) bringen(a).
> > Ich(b)   [kinda long pause]
> > liebe dich(b).
> >
> > in which (a) is the first rhymeword,
> > (a)(a) two words which rhyme on the first rhymeword,
> > (b) is the second rhymeword and again
> > (b) a word that rhymes on the second rhymeword.
>
> He also mentions that variations from this scheme are possible.
> I wrote earlier that my translation was only a first attempt,
> but iesk found this older translation {ti'e} by Alex Koch
> and this one is quite nice, though I think it's a little bit lengthy.
>
>
> v4hn
>

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Well i think if you could omit the=A0{<span style=3D"color:rgb(34,34,34);fo=
nt-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)=
">lu tu&#39;e}</span>=A0in the beginning and the {<span style=3D"color:rgb(=
34,34,34);font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px;background-color:rgb(=
255,255,255)">tu&#39;u li&#39;u</span>} in the end, it might work quite wel=
l.<div>

though the second line needs to contain another two or three silable word, =
or else the timing won&#39;t fit so nicely...<div>best would be one ending =
in an &quot;gu&quot; or &quot;ku&quot;</div><div><br><div class=3D"gmail_qu=
ote">

2012/8/16 v4hn <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:me@v4hn.de" target=
=3D"_blank">me@v4hn.de</a>&gt;</span><br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" =
style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">coi=
 do<br>

<div class=3D"im"><br>
On Thu, Aug 16, 2012 at 02:53:22PM +0200, Paul Predkiewicz wrote:<br>
&gt; Sorry to interrupt in english, but my lojban is only as good as to<br>
&gt; understand this is about the song Liebeslied from Bodo Wartke and that=
 you<br>
</div>&gt; have come up with a verse already, [...]<br>
<br>
No problem at all, I started to learn Lojban only recently.<br>
It takes me a lot of time to write mails in lojban.<br>
<div class=3D"im"><br>
&gt; but cant find the gismu rimni or the<br>
&gt; rafsi rim anywhere here. I just wanted to say that bodo has also provi=
ded a<br>
&gt; blueprint for the rhyming.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; i.e.:<br>
&gt; Ich will&#39;s in allen Sprachen f=FCr dich singen(a),<br>
&gt; auf allen Instrumenten zum Erklingen(a) bringen(a).<br>
&gt; Ich(b) =A0 [kinda long pause]<br>
&gt; liebe dich(b).<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; in which (a) is the first rhymeword,<br>
&gt; (a)(a) two words which rhyme on the first rhymeword,<br>
&gt; (b) is the second rhymeword and again<br>
&gt; (b) a word that rhymes on the second rhymeword.<br>
<br>
</div>He also mentions that variations from this scheme are possible.<br>
I wrote earlier that my translation was only a first attempt,<br>
but iesk found this older translation {ti&#39;e} by Alex Koch<br>
and this one is quite nice, though I think it&#39;s a little bit lengthy.<b=
r>
<span class=3D"HOEnZb"><font color=3D"#888888"><br>
<br>
v4hn<br>
</font></span></blockquote></div><br></div></div>

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