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While I think this is an interesting idea, at the same time I'm not really
sure it results in the "sing-song" character of rhyming verse in English.
However, I am not familiar with rhyme in other languages, except that I
know that Latin very nearly doesn't have rhyme at all. Occasionally couplet
authors can pull it off, but Latin primarily depends on rhythm rather than
rhyme, at least classically.

mu'o mi'e la latro'a

On Sun, Nov 25, 2012 at 8:01 AM, vitci'i <celestialcognition@gmail.com>wrote:

> Different cultures have had different rules for what sort of repetition
> is considered poetic: rhyme, assonance, consonance, etc. I wanted
> something unique and inherently lojbanic. Here's my proposal.
>
>
> Two words {jborimni} iff they share at least one rafsi-candidate.[1] For
> example, "bangu" and "bakni" jborimni because they share the
> rafsi-candidate "-ban-".
>
> For purposes of this definition, the rafsi-candidates of a cmavo are
> considered to be its actual rafsi (if any) and itself.
>
> Lujvo are read as their veljvo (e.g., "brivla" is treated as equivalent
> to "bridi valsi"). Fu'ivla/zi'evla never jborimni with anything.
> (Self-jborimni is considered a degenerate case, to be avoided.)
>
> Cmene should be quasi-parsed: ".lojban." rhymes as "logji bangu" (e.g.
> with "bargu"); ".alis." rhymes as ".a lis." (e.g. with "lisri").
>
>
> Note that (lo se gismu be fa zo jborimni) is not necessarily transitive.
>
>
> This definition can be used in a variety of verse structures. Perhaps
> you might want ends of lines to jborimni, or beginnings, or the
> beginning of each line with its end, or to use jborimni placed
> irregularly throughout the middles of lines.
>
>
>
> [1] See http://dag.github.com/cll/4/6/ for the rules on deriving rafsi
> candidates from gismu.
>
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While I think this is an interesting idea, at the same time I&#39;m not rea=
lly sure it results in the &quot;sing-song&quot; character of rhyming verse=
 in English. However, I am not familiar with rhyme in other languages, exce=
pt that I know that Latin very nearly doesn&#39;t have rhyme at all. Occasi=
onally couplet authors can pull it off, but Latin primarily depends on rhyt=
hm rather than rhyme, at least classically.<br>
<br>mu&#39;o mi&#39;e la latro&#39;a<br><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On S=
un, Nov 25, 2012 at 8:01 AM, vitci&#39;i <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"m=
ailto:celestialcognition@gmail.com" target=3D"_blank">celestialcognition@gm=
ail.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Different cultures have had different rules =
for what sort of repetition<br>
is considered poetic: rhyme, assonance, consonance, etc. I wanted<br>
something unique and inherently lojbanic. Here&#39;s my proposal.<br>
<br>
<br>
Two words {jborimni} iff they share at least one rafsi-candidate.[1] For<br=
>
example, &quot;bangu&quot; and &quot;bakni&quot; jborimni because they shar=
e the<br>
rafsi-candidate &quot;-ban-&quot;.<br>
<br>
For purposes of this definition, the rafsi-candidates of a cmavo are<br>
considered to be its actual rafsi (if any) and itself.<br>
<br>
Lujvo are read as their veljvo (e.g., &quot;brivla&quot; is treated as equi=
valent<br>
to &quot;bridi valsi&quot;). Fu&#39;ivla/zi&#39;evla never jborimni with an=
ything.<br>
(Self-jborimni is considered a degenerate case, to be avoided.)<br>
<br>
Cmene should be quasi-parsed: &quot;.lojban.&quot; rhymes as &quot;logji ba=
ngu&quot; (e.g.<br>
with &quot;bargu&quot;); &quot;.alis.&quot; rhymes as &quot;.a lis.&quot; (=
e.g. with &quot;lisri&quot;).<br>
<br>
<br>
Note that (lo se gismu be fa zo jborimni) is not necessarily transitive.<br=
>
<br>
<br>
This definition can be used in a variety of verse structures. Perhaps<br>
you might want ends of lines to jborimni, or beginnings, or the<br>
beginning of each line with its end, or to use jborimni placed<br>
irregularly throughout the middles of lines.<br>
<br>
<br>
<br>
[1] See <a href=3D"http://dag.github.com/cll/4/6/" target=3D"_blank">http:/=
/dag.github.com/cll/4/6/</a> for the rules on deriving rafsi<br>
candidates from gismu.<br>
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