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On Tuesday, December 24, 2013 11:28:14 selpa'i wrote:
> I can finally announce the publication of my translation of 'The
> Wonderful Wizard of Oz'.
> 
> Clocking in at 52283 words, it qualifies as one of the longest Lojban
> works to date, if not the longest.
> 
> You can go check it out on www.selpahi.de/oz.html

Many thanks! It'll take me a while to read through.

I noticed an error at the start: "la nakfamti .xenris." is ungrammatical. You 
could say "la noi nakfamti .xenris." or "la poi nakfamti .xenris.".

Pierre
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