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    point I'm currently writing, for complicated reasons, a main character is
    starting to pepper their English speech with Lojban's attitudinals, evidentials,
    discursives and vocatives. [...] 
 
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I've been writing a rather odd science fiction story. At the point I'm
currently writing, for complicated reasons, a main character is starting to
pepper their English speech with Lojban's attitudinals, evidentials,
discursives and vocatives.

While I'm probably familiar enough with them to avoid making any major
blunders, and I have a beta-reader who knows how to check jbovlaste, I
think I might be able to do even better if I could get some help and
suggestions from one or more people who /really/ understand Lojban. For
example, suggesting alternate attitudinal constructions, or pointing out
places I missed where a discursive could be added.

Would anybody here be interested in becoming my Lojban reference expert?
Failing that, would anyone care to check the Lojban I've written so far for
obvious blunders? If either case is true, my current working draft can be
commented on at
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-BfyA18VKxT_TJhfPtvFsj-0d7DY4BS1SLoY8fNfWc4/edit
. (Please note that due to hardware issues, at present I can't interact
with Google Docs' "Suggestions", only its "Comments".)


-- 
Thank you for your time,
--
DataPacRat
"Then again, I could be wrong."

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<br><br>-- <br>Thank you for your time,<br>--<br>DataPacRat<br>&quot;Then a=
gain, I could be wrong.&quot;<br>

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