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 Content preview:  I can totally do this, unless I am that beta reader. :P On
    Feb 2, 2015 2:47 AM, "DataPacRat" <datapacrat@gmail.com> wrote: > I've been
    writing a rather odd science fiction story. At the point I'm > currently
   writing, for complicated reasons, a main character is starting to > pepper
    their English speech with Lojban's attitudinals, evidentials, > discursives
    and vocatives. > > While I'm probably familiar enough with them to avoid
   making any major > blunders, and I have a beta-reader who knows how to check
    jbovlaste, I > think I might be able to do even better if I could get some
    help and > suggestions from one or more people who /really/ understand Lojban.
    For > example, suggesting alternate attitudinal constructions, or pointing
    out > places I missed where a discursive could be added. > > Would anybody
    here be interested in becoming my Lojban reference expert? > Failing that,
    would anyone care to check the Lojban I've written so far for > obvious blunders?
    If either case is true, my current working draft can be > commented on at
    > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-BfyA18VKxT_TJhfPtvFsj-0d7DY4BS1SLoY8fNfWc4/edit
    > . (Please note that due to hardware issues, at present I can't interact
    > with Google Docs' "Suggestions", only its "Comments".) > > > -- > Thank
    you for your time, > -- > DataPacRat > "Then again, I could be wrong." >
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I can totally do this, unless I am that beta reader. :P
On Feb 2, 2015 2:47 AM, "DataPacRat" <datapacrat@gmail.com> wrote:

> I've been writing a rather odd science fiction story. At the point I'm
> currently writing, for complicated reasons, a main character is starting to
> pepper their English speech with Lojban's attitudinals, evidentials,
> discursives and vocatives.
>
> While I'm probably familiar enough with them to avoid making any major
> blunders, and I have a beta-reader who knows how to check jbovlaste, I
> think I might be able to do even better if I could get some help and
> suggestions from one or more people who /really/ understand Lojban. For
> example, suggesting alternate attitudinal constructions, or pointing out
> places I missed where a discursive could be added.
>
> Would anybody here be interested in becoming my Lojban reference expert?
> Failing that, would anyone care to check the Lojban I've written so far for
> obvious blunders? If either case is true, my current working draft can be
> commented on at
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-BfyA18VKxT_TJhfPtvFsj-0d7DY4BS1SLoY8fNfWc4/edit
> . (Please note that due to hardware issues, at present I can't interact
> with Google Docs' "Suggestions", only its "Comments".)
>
>
> --
> Thank you for your time,
> --
> DataPacRat
> "Then again, I could be wrong."
>
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<p dir=3D"ltr">I can totally do this, unless I am that beta reader. :P </p>
<div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Feb 2, 2015 2:47 AM, &quot;DataPacRat&quot; &=
lt;<a href=3D"mailto:datapacrat@gmail.com">datapacrat@gmail.com</a>&gt; wro=
te:<br type=3D"attribution"><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"marg=
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iting a rather odd science fiction story. At the point I&#39;m currently wr=
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r English speech with Lojban&#39;s attitudinals, evidentials, discursives a=
nd vocatives.<div><br></div><div>While I&#39;m probably familiar enough wit=
h them=C2=A0to avoid making any major blunders, and I have a=C2=A0beta-read=
er who knows how to=C2=A0check jbovlaste, I think I might be able to do eve=
n better if I could get some help and suggestions from one or more people w=
ho /really/ understand Lojban. For example, suggesting alternate attitudina=
l constructions, or pointing out places I missed where a discursive could b=
e added.</div><div><br></div><div>Would anybody here be interested in becom=
ing my Lojban reference expert? Failing that, would anyone care to check th=
e Lojban I&#39;ve written so far for obvious blunders? If either case is tr=
ue, my current working draft can be commented on at=C2=A0<a href=3D"https:/=
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tvFsj-0d7DY4BS1SLoY8fNfWc4/edit</a> . (Please note that due to hardware iss=
ues, at present I can&#39;t interact with Google Docs&#39; &quot;Suggestion=
s&quot;, only its &quot;Comments&quot;.)<span></span><span></span></div>
<br><br>-- <br>Thank you for your time,<br>--<br>DataPacRat<br>&quot;Then a=
gain, I could be wrong.&quot;<br>

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