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la .camgusmis. cu cusku di'e
> http://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_prince_spacing_test_2015-07-20.pdf
> is my attempt to merge everybody's thoughts about spacing.  Compare
> http://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_build-2015-06-20/cll_prince.pdf
>
> It has *MUCH* less vertical whitespace, in basically every
> department.  It also has smaller headers.  And less indentation.
>
> Sentences after examples and the like that appear to be
> continuations (i.e. start with lower case) are not indented.
>
> I think that's most of it.
>
> Thoughts?

There is too little space around the examples and cmavo tables now, so 
they almost disappear into the surrounding paragraphs. I don't know if 
it's due to a missing line break or something else.

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