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[2a00:1450:400c:c05::236]) by gmr-mx.google.com with ESMTPS id gt6si84208wib.1.2015.08.13.05.51.18 for (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 bits=128/128); Thu, 13 Aug 2015 05:51:18 -0700 (PDT) Received-SPF: pass (google.com: domain of mturniansky@gmail.com designates 2a00:1450:400c:c05::236 as permitted sender) client-ip=2a00:1450:400c:c05::236; Received: by mail-wi0-x236.google.com with SMTP id ja10so150205119wic.1 for ; Thu, 13 Aug 2015 05:51:18 -0700 (PDT) X-Received: by 10.180.186.35 with SMTP id fh3mr57748411wic.7.1439470278583; Thu, 13 Aug 2015 05:51:18 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.28.216.69 with HTTP; Thu, 13 Aug 2015 05:50:38 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: <20150813015026.GC16016@stodi.digitalkingdom.org> References: <20150720074736.GE27469@stodi.digitalkingdom.org> <55ACDD18.10906@gmx.de> <20150813013002.GA16016@stodi.digitalkingdom.org> <20150813015026.GC16016@stodi.digitalkingdom.org> From: Michael Turniansky Date: Thu, 13 Aug 2015 08:50:38 -0400 Message-ID: Subject: Re: [lojban] CLL v1.1: Visual commentary, please. To: lojban@googlegroups.com Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary=001a11c261209eab61051d30ca6c X-Original-Sender: Mturniansky@gmail.com X-Original-Authentication-Results: gmr-mx.google.com; spf=pass (google.com: domain of mturniansky@gmail.com designates 2a00:1450:400c:c05::236 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom=mturniansky@gmail.com; dmarc=pass (p=NONE dis=NONE) header.from=gmail.com Reply-To: lojban@googlegroups.com Precedence: list Mailing-list: list lojban@googlegroups.com; contact lojban+owners@googlegroups.com List-ID: X-Spam-Checked-In-Group: lojban@googlegroups.com X-Google-Group-Id: 1004133512417 List-Post: , List-Help: , List-Archive: , List-Unsubscribe: , X-Spam-Score: -1.7 (-) X-Spam_score: -1.7 X-Spam_score_int: -16 X-Spam_bar: - --001a11c261209eab61051d30ca6c Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 I don't know if we are supposed to be proofreading (because I know the "gicmu", etc. issue in the index was already addressed), but I just happened to notice that on page 481, under VEI and VEhO the equation for some reason threw a line break between n and the superscripted 2... --gejyspa On Wed, Aug 12, 2015 at 9:50 PM, Robin Lee Powell < rlpowell@digitalkingdom.org> wrote: > On Wed, Aug 12, 2015 at 06:30:03PM -0700, Robin Lee Powell wrote: > > On Mon, Jul 20, 2015 at 01:35:52PM +0200, selpa'i wrote: > > > la .camgusmis. cu cusku di'e > > > > > http://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_prince_spacing_test_2015-07-20.pdf > > > >is my attempt to merge everybody's thoughts about spacing. > > > >Compare > > > > > http://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_build-2015-06-20/cll_prince.pdf > > > > > > > >It has *MUCH* less vertical whitespace, in basically every > > > >department. It also has smaller headers. And less > > > >indentation. > > > > > > > >Sentences after examples and the like that appear to be > > > >continuations (i.e. start with lower case) are not indented. > > > > > > > >I think that's most of it. > > > > > > > >Thoughts? > > > > > > There is too little space around the examples and cmavo tables > > > now, so they almost disappear into the surrounding paragraphs. I > > > don't know if it's due to a missing line break or something > > > else. > > > > Try this: > > > http://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_prince_spacing_test_2015-08-12.pdf > > Complete version: > > http://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_prince_spacing_test_2015-08-12-full.pdf > > Which is 130 pages shorter than: > > http://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_prince_for_lsi_2015-03-15.pdf > > -- > http://intelligence.org/ : Our last, best hope for a fantastic future. > .i ko na cpedu lo nu stidi vau loi jbopre .i dafsku lu na go'i li'u .e > lu go'i li'u .i ji'a go'i lu na'e go'i li'u .e lu go'i na'i li'u .e > lu no'e go'i li'u .e lu to'e go'i li'u .e lu lo mamta be do cu sofybakni > li'u > > -- > You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups > "lojban" group. > To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an > email to lojban+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. > To post to this group, send email to lojban@googlegroups.com. > Visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/lojban. > For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/d/optout. > -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "lojban" group. 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=C2=A0 I don't know if we are supposed to be proofread= ing (because I know the "gicmu", etc. issue in the index was alre= ady addressed), but I just happened to notice that on page 481, under VEI a= nd VEhO the equation for some reason threw a line break between n and the s= uperscripted 2...
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0--gejyspa

On Wed, Aug 12,= 2015 at 9:50 PM, Robin Lee Powell <rlpowell@digitalkingdom.org<= /a>> wrote:
On= Wed, Aug 12, 2015 at 06:30:03PM -0700, Robin Lee Powell wrote:
> On Mon, Jul 20, 2015 at 01:35:52PM +0200, selpa'i wrote:
> > la .camgusmis. cu cusku di'e
> > >
h= ttp://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_prince_spacing_test_2015-= 07-20.pdf
> > >is my attempt to merge everybody's thoughts about spacing= .
> > >Compare
> > >http= ://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_build-2015-06-20/cll_prince.= pdf
> > >
> > >It has *MUCH* less vertical whitespace, in basically every > > >department.=C2=A0 It also has smaller headers.=C2=A0 And less=
> > >indentation.
> > >
> > >Sentences after examples and the like that appear to be
> > >continuations (i.e. start with lower case) are not indented.<= br> > > >
> > >I think that's most of it.
> > >
> > >Thoughts?
> >
> > There is too little space around the examples and cmavo tables > > now, so they almost disappear into the surrounding paragraphs. I<= br> > > don't know if it's due to a missing line break or somethi= ng
> > else.
>
> Try this:
> http://vri= ci.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_prince_spacing_test_2015-08-12.pdf=

Complete version:
http://vri= ci.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_prince_spacing_test_2015-08-12-ful= l.pdf

Which is 130 pages shorter than:
http://vrici.lojban.= org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_prince_for_lsi_2015-03-15.pdf

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