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That sort of thing should go in https://github.com/lojban/cll/issues
(and gleki already did it for you).

What do you think of the whitespace/layout?

On Thu, Aug 13, 2015 at 08:50:38AM -0400, Michael Turniansky wrote:
>   I don't know if we are supposed to be proofreading (because I know the
> "gicmu", etc. issue in the index was already addressed), but I just
> happened to notice that on page 481, under VEI and VEhO the equation for
> some reason threw a line break between n and the superscripted 2...
>          --gejyspa
> 
> On Wed, Aug 12, 2015 at 9:50 PM, Robin Lee Powell <
> rlpowell@digitalkingdom.org> wrote:
> 
> > On Wed, Aug 12, 2015 at 06:30:03PM -0700, Robin Lee Powell wrote:
> > > On Mon, Jul 20, 2015 at 01:35:52PM +0200, selpa'i wrote:
> > > > la .camgusmis. cu cusku di'e
> > > > >
> > http://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_prince_spacing_test_2015-07-20.pdf
> > > > >is my attempt to merge everybody's thoughts about spacing.
> > > > >Compare
> > > > >
> > http://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_build-2015-06-20/cll_prince.pdf
> > > > >
> > > > >It has *MUCH* less vertical whitespace, in basically every
> > > > >department.  It also has smaller headers.  And less
> > > > >indentation.
> > > > >
> > > > >Sentences after examples and the like that appear to be
> > > > >continuations (i.e. start with lower case) are not indented.
> > > > >
> > > > >I think that's most of it.
> > > > >
> > > > >Thoughts?
> > > >
> > > > There is too little space around the examples and cmavo tables
> > > > now, so they almost disappear into the surrounding paragraphs. I
> > > > don't know if it's due to a missing line break or something
> > > > else.
> > >
> > > Try this:
> > >
> > http://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_prince_spacing_test_2015-08-12.pdf
> >
> > Complete version:
> >
> > http://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_prince_spacing_test_2015-08-12-full.pdf
> >
> > Which is 130 pages shorter than:
> >
> > http://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_prince_for_lsi_2015-03-15.pdf
> >
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