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I have been briefly reviewing the CLL version at http://vrici.lojban.org/~r=
lpowell/media/public/cll_nochunks_2015-10-05/#section-pronunciation

The main feedback I have is to be sure that its suggestion of pronunciation=
 is correct, especially for "o".

The text seems to make assumptions about the reader's dialect of English.
The section on pronunciation says "o as in =E2=80=9Cdome=E2=80=9D" but my d=
ialect of English pronounces "dome" as http://howjsay.com/index.php?word=3D=
dome&submit=3DSubmit (i.e. a diphthong, which is incorrect). This may resul=
t in many readers learning the wrong pronunciation of Lojban.

I mentioned this issue also existing in the "Level 0 Booklet" publication i=
n my "Pronunciation of "o"" email to the lojban-beginners group. There must=
 be a better example word that has the correct "o" for all dialects of Engl=
ish.

So this is CLLv1.1: is this only for fixing errata? How much content is sub=
ject to change? Is there a schedule for the second edition? https://mw.lojb=
an.org/papri/suggestions_for_CLL,_second_edition

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From: lojban@googlegroups.com <lojban@googlegroups.com> on behalf of Robin =
Lee Powell <rlpowell@digitalkingdom.org>
Sent: Saturday, 10 October 2015 1:33 PM
To: lojban@googlegroups.com
Subject: [lojban] CLLv1.1 goes out on Monday, 12 Oct 2015

I'm finishing a review of Chapter 19, but it's otherwise done and I
expect to have that done shortly.

So, if you need me to wait because you're reviewing it, now would be
a *very* good time to say so.  I can, of course, always update it
later.

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