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[212.227.17.21]) by gmr-mx.google.com with ESMTPS id c7si271939wmf.2.2016.04.20.11.29.28 for (version=TLS1_2 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 bits=128/128); Wed, 20 Apr 2016 11:29:28 -0700 (PDT) Received-SPF: pass (google.com: domain of seladwa@gmx.de designates 212.227.17.21 as permitted sender) client-ip=212.227.17.21; Received: from [192.168.2.128] ([217.246.174.190]) by mail.gmx.com (mrgmx103) with ESMTPSA (Nemesis) id 0MXZNq-1bDHaj3h7m-00WYLi for ; Wed, 20 Apr 2016 20:29:27 +0200 Subject: Re: [lojban] la nicte cadzu References: <54247036.1070205@gmx.de> From: selpahi To: lojban@googlegroups.com Message-ID: <5717CA89.1070008@gmx.de> Date: Wed, 20 Apr 2016 20:29:29 +0200 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows NT 6.1; WOW64; rv:38.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/38.7.2 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: <54247036.1070205@gmx.de> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8; format=flowed X-Provags-ID: V03:K0:hSwDJW8yw/gRVVgiyd0Z81UijafRTo1FqMSD0wTwDSXYrI1gWvV VUd/VTKriuR6WDdktzA1XotZ4vJO8JCletSfaMgw7QgTqMR37NFSV0IazNyKXJ4d8J5epcH 5Bb7k6QkIOd7s5LieRdnCICJOvrsd1BCzhHOYEwe0HnDbD8xYH8GXFRPmIESGNw66JinHYv IWdamfteUFYh3Ukqg0TiQ== X-UI-Out-Filterresults: notjunk:1;V01:K0:Mt02RtY3sGY=:htd7He4vd2TuTCTAfk2oEc 07OPKCeAfOuuPbjoG3JgEklkQEblYCIdRMB55Ti2xTAkNgH14B4tgZrPjH667pWvktdhTVVzG EsRHbK+uGudDjMzGIJGx2xy/T8ad4+bLYYeFGfja5lBndNRGcJg7a+b9z7SFX6iDzSfXKzgPj NvQ1Y7pGeUrrpuy5RsdrLsvnK2bSk61rg6KS9p9tdcpSV+QLzMsd+dvsft+wm41+rXTKVl3bj gJi2UCSYBdkoo0OrFNFRC5/9CJB5JuoI/kdmgK9wWPfZtRN1ecxxlvOLYwGHFWC8X0uquda6w oFAZXBkLTl01cVwtzHIqlkwk5gEXeGGJOuLoM7TC/FUdoHFYP+bewrwGjRNhhHvLBx4uRPmbB tjeawCcDPtFCWLf0CVPfMW+IA5Tt142tqHAPVQEQj5FkRZxb64PTp0ch2aW0JG6ajbFAhqm4s wr+sL/76XapFZ0Ejy/dJiQXh8+DhPGbc1JeXdHr+sbkVpRstcU7xsmWF22mPIlZMa19uyHSAi W9gAdMjApETDotFGyaYj5YxCbS6LeUj6vwkFbPqdw8FXzu8B5w2nKzhYO0w0v8OGwEazrjZhq /ObOImljrXIV7wYdKGBpVhWo+bpI/0q5O3utt3+7wSz6JuW861kc1v0B9ask27hP/SmEU4/5O M7y1qZD+k9cCt74JdiCwhhWpg19RS9UjLB1wELHJNvb/O8/P5X2AYHHbTJEOUtVhrNX9k1iBL jOYbODRaf3WCfxYYr1FIUimlI+Zhuvjy4Tc/b2FtDhXn1NnlFrF2xkBmwwQdXfrDam/6Keq4f oIjNmUX X-Original-Sender: seladwa@gmx.de X-Original-Authentication-Results: gmr-mx.google.com; spf=pass (google.com: domain of seladwa@gmx.de designates 212.227.17.21 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom=seladwa@gmx.de Reply-To: lojban@googlegroups.com Precedence: list Mailing-list: list lojban@googlegroups.com; contact lojban+owners@googlegroups.com List-ID: X-Spam-Checked-In-Group: lojban@googlegroups.com X-Google-Group-Id: 1004133512417 List-Post: , List-Help: , List-Archive: , List-Unsubscribe: , X-Spam-Score: -1.7 (-) X-Spam_score: -1.7 X-Spam_score_int: -16 X-Spam_bar: - de'i li 2014/09/25 mi ciska di'e > coi jbopre > > I collected the different sections of la nicte cadzu that are linked on > the tiki into a single text and applied a little bit of visual editting > (but not much). The point of this was to make the text - the longest > original work in Lojban - more easily accessible to interested readers. > I think it deserves to be read by more people, and having all the > segments in one coherent file should make the reading experience much > more pleasant. > > You can find the text here: http://goo.gl/J7exyE > > (You can export it as PDF and other file types too, so you don't have to > read it online if you don't want to) > > If Robin allows it, we could gather errata in some place and improve the > text, but as he is extremely busy I expect it will be very difficult for > him to approve the errata. For what it's worth, Robin has let me know that as long as he is credited as the original author, he doesn't care what happens to la nicte cadzu. We are free to edit the text, in other words. I also asked him if he knows where the story was intended to go and what the ending was going to be, but I didn't get an answer. Fixing grammar and typos, even fixing style problems, is much easier than inventing a whole second half plus an ending. Anyway, here's a PDF for easier reading: http://selpahi.de/LANICTECADZU.pdf ~~~mi'e la selpa'i -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "lojban" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to lojban+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. To post to this group, send email to lojban@googlegroups.com. Visit this group at https://groups.google.com/group/lojban. For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/d/optout.