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The very first {ni'o} in the pdf at http://selpahi.de/LANICTECADZU.pdf has
a right single-quote rather than an apostrophe. The few others I looked at
were okay.
Is the whole work being edited? I haven't been able to follow the
Lojban-only posts lately.

stevo

On Wed, Apr 20, 2016 at 1:29 PM, selpahi <seladwa@gmx.de> wrote:

> de'i li 2014/09/25 mi ciska di'e
>
>> coi jbopre
>>
>> I collected the different sections of la nicte cadzu that are linked on
>> the tiki into a single text and applied a little bit of visual editting
>> (but not much). The point of this was to make the text - the longest
>> original work in Lojban - more easily accessible to interested readers.
>> I think it deserves to be read by more people, and having all the
>> segments in one coherent file should make the reading experience much
>> more pleasant.
>>
>> You can find the text here: http://goo.gl/J7exyE
>>
>> (You can export it as PDF and other file types too, so you don't have to
>> read it online if you don't want to)
>>
>> If Robin allows it, we could gather errata in some place and improve the
>> text, but as he is extremely busy I expect it will be very difficult for
>> him to approve the errata.
>>
>
> For what it's worth, Robin has let me know that as long as he is credited
> as the original author, he doesn't care what happens to la nicte cadzu. We
> are free to edit the text, in other words.
>
> I also asked him if he knows where the story was intended to go and what
> the ending was going to be, but I didn't get an answer. Fixing grammar and
> typos, even fixing style problems, is much easier than inventing a whole
> second half plus an ending.
>
> Anyway, here's a PDF for easier reading:
> http://selpahi.de/LANICTECADZU.pdf
>
> ~~~mi'e la selpa'i
>
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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:&quot;co=
urier new&quot;,monospace">The very first {ni&#39;o} in the pdf at=C2=A0<a =
href=3D"http://selpahi.de/LANICTECADZU.pdf" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_b=
lank" style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px">http://selpah=
i.de/LANICTECADZU.pdf</a>=C2=A0has a right single-quote rather than an apos=
trophe. The few others I looked at were okay.=C2=A0</div><div class=3D"gmai=
l_default" style=3D"font-family:&quot;courier new&quot;,monospace">Is the w=
hole work being edited? I haven&#39;t been able to follow the Lojban-only p=
osts lately.=C2=A0</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:&=
quot;courier new&quot;,monospace"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" st=
yle=3D"font-family:&quot;courier new&quot;,monospace">stevo</div></div><div=
 class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Wed, Apr 20, 2016 =
at 1:29 PM, selpahi <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:seladwa@gmx.de"=
 target=3D"_blank">seladwa@gmx.de</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote clas=
s=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;pad=
ding-left:1ex">de&#39;i li 2014/09/25 mi ciska di&#39;e<span class=3D""><br=
>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
coi jbopre<br>
<br>
I collected the different sections of la nicte cadzu that are linked on<br>
the tiki into a single text and applied a little bit of visual editting<br>
(but not much). The point of this was to make the text - the longest<br>
original work in Lojban - more easily accessible to interested readers.<br>
I think it deserves to be read by more people, and having all the<br>
segments in one coherent file should make the reading experience much<br>
more pleasant.<br>
<br>
You can find the text here: <a href=3D"http://goo.gl/J7exyE" rel=3D"norefer=
rer" target=3D"_blank">http://goo.gl/J7exyE</a><br>
<br>
(You can export it as PDF and other file types too, so you don&#39;t have t=
o<br>
read it online if you don&#39;t want to)<br>
<br>
If Robin allows it, we could gather errata in some place and improve the<br=
>
text, but as he is extremely busy I expect it will be very difficult for<br=
>
him to approve the errata.<br>
</blockquote>
<br></span>
For what it&#39;s worth, Robin has let me know that as long as he is credit=
ed as the original author, he doesn&#39;t care what happens to la nicte cad=
zu. We are free to edit the text, in other words.<br>
<br>
I also asked him if he knows where the story was intended to go and what th=
e ending was going to be, but I didn&#39;t get an answer. Fixing grammar an=
d typos, even fixing style problems, is much easier than inventing a whole =
second half plus an ending.<br>
<br>
Anyway, here&#39;s a PDF for easier reading:<br>
<a href=3D"http://selpahi.de/LANICTECADZU.pdf" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D=
"_blank">http://selpahi.de/LANICTECADZU.pdf</a><br>
<br>
~~~mi&#39;e la selpa&#39;i<span class=3D""><br>
<br>
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