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[2607:f8b0:4003:c06::233]) by gmr-mx.google.com with ESMTPS id k1si871106itb.1.2016.06.05.13.57.54 for (version=TLS1_2 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 bits=128/128); Sun, 05 Jun 2016 13:57:54 -0700 (PDT) Received-SPF: pass (google.com: domain of lytlesw@gmail.com designates 2607:f8b0:4003:c06::233 as permitted sender) client-ip=2607:f8b0:4003:c06::233; Received: by mail-oi0-x233.google.com with SMTP id e72so199709593oib.1 for ; Sun, 05 Jun 2016 13:57:54 -0700 (PDT) X-Received: by 10.202.184.6 with SMTP id i6mr7392887oif.76.1465160273901; Sun, 05 Jun 2016 13:57:53 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.157.43.43 with HTTP; Sun, 5 Jun 2016 13:57:24 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: References: <54247036.1070205@gmx.de> <5717CA89.1070008@gmx.de> From: MorphemeAddict Date: Sun, 5 Jun 2016 15:57:24 -0500 Message-ID: Subject: Re: [lojban] la nicte cadzu To: lojban@googlegroups.com Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary=001a113cd190aa3f1605348e3550 X-Original-Sender: lytlesw@gmail.com X-Original-Authentication-Results: gmr-mx.google.com; dkim=pass header.i=@gmail.com; spf=pass (google.com: domain of lytlesw@gmail.com designates 2607:f8b0:4003:c06::233 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom=lytlesw@gmail.com; dmarc=pass (p=NONE dis=NONE) header.from=gmail.com Reply-To: lojban@googlegroups.com Precedence: list Mailing-list: list lojban@googlegroups.com; contact lojban+owners@googlegroups.com List-ID: X-Spam-Checked-In-Group: lojban@googlegroups.com X-Google-Group-Id: 1004133512417 List-Post: , List-Help: , List-Archive: , List-Unsubscribe: , X-Spam-Score: -1.8 (-) X-Spam_score: -1.8 X-Spam_score_int: -17 X-Spam_bar: - --001a113cd190aa3f1605348e3550 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Also {la'o} (beginning of p. 1). stevo On Sun, Jun 5, 2016 at 3:54 PM, MorphemeAddict wrote: > The very first {ni'o} in the pdf at http://selpahi.de/LANICTECADZU.pdf has > a right single-quote rather than an apostrophe. The few others I looked at > were okay. > Is the whole work being edited? I haven't been able to follow the > Lojban-only posts lately. > > stevo > > On Wed, Apr 20, 2016 at 1:29 PM, selpahi wrote: > >> de'i li 2014/09/25 mi ciska di'e >> >>> coi jbopre >>> >>> I collected the different sections of la nicte cadzu that are linked on >>> the tiki into a single text and applied a little bit of visual editting >>> (but not much). The point of this was to make the text - the longest >>> original work in Lojban - more easily accessible to interested readers. >>> I think it deserves to be read by more people, and having all the >>> segments in one coherent file should make the reading experience much >>> more pleasant. >>> >>> You can find the text here: http://goo.gl/J7exyE >>> >>> (You can export it as PDF and other file types too, so you don't have to >>> read it online if you don't want to) >>> >>> If Robin allows it, we could gather errata in some place and improve the >>> text, but as he is extremely busy I expect it will be very difficult for >>> him to approve the errata. >>> >> >> For what it's worth, Robin has let me know that as long as he is credited >> as the original author, he doesn't care what happens to la nicte cadzu. We >> are free to edit the text, in other words. >> >> I also asked him if he knows where the story was intended to go and what >> the ending was going to be, but I didn't get an answer. Fixing grammar and >> typos, even fixing style problems, is much easier than inventing a whole >> second half plus an ending. >> >> Anyway, here's a PDF for easier reading: >> http://selpahi.de/LANICTECADZU.pdf >> >> ~~~mi'e la selpa'i >> >> -- >> You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups >> "lojban" group. >> To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an >> email to lojban+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. >> To post to this group, send email to lojban@googlegroups.com. >> Visit this group at https://groups.google.com/group/lojban. >> >> For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/d/optout. >> > > -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "lojban" group. 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Also {la'o} (beginning of p. 1).=C2=A0

stev= o

On S= un, Jun 5, 2016 at 3:54 PM, MorphemeAddict <lytlesw@gmail.com> wrote:
The = very first {ni'o} in the pdf at=C2=A0http://selpahi.de/LANICTECADZU.pdf=C2=A0= has a right single-quote rather than an apostrophe. The few others I looked= at were okay.=C2=A0
Is the whole work being edited? I haven= 't been able to follow the Lojban-only posts lately.=C2=A0

stevo

On Wed, Apr = 20, 2016 at 1:29 PM, selpahi <seladwa@gmx.de> wrote:
de'i li 2014/09/25 mi ciska di'e
coi jbopre

I collected the different sections of la nicte cadzu that are linked on
the tiki into a single text and applied a little bit of visual editting
(but not much). The point of this was to make the text - the longest
original work in Lojban - more easily accessible to interested readers.
I think it deserves to be read by more people, and having all the
segments in one coherent file should make the reading experience much
more pleasant.

You can find the text here: http://goo.gl/J7exyE

(You can export it as PDF and other file types too, so you don't have t= o
read it online if you don't want to)

If Robin allows it, we could gather errata in some place and improve the text, but as he is extremely busy I expect it will be very difficult for him to approve the errata.

For what it's worth, Robin has let me know that as long as he is credit= ed as the original author, he doesn't care what happens to la nicte cad= zu. We are free to edit the text, in other words.

I also asked him if he knows where the story was intended to go and what th= e ending was going to be, but I didn't get an answer. Fixing grammar an= d typos, even fixing style problems, is much easier than inventing a whole = second half plus an ending.

Anyway, here's a PDF for easier reading:
http://selpahi.de/LANICTECADZU.pdf

~~~mi'e la selpa'i

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