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On Monday, August 08, 2016 09:37:39 Timothy Lawrence wrote:
> pe'u ko dragau mi ki'u la lojban.na verclibau mi
>=20
> Corrigez-moi, s'il vous pla=C3=AEt, parce que le fran=C3=A7ias n'est pas =
ma langue
> maternelle.

fran=C3=A7ais

> Please correct any of my language versions or suggest improvements - Engl=
ish
> is my native language so I hope I got that one right ;)
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>=20
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> fi'i ko spuda
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> Vous =C3=AAtes invit=C3=A9s =C3=A0 r=C3=A9pondre.
>=20
> You are welcome to respond.
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>=20
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> coi le karni.
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> i mi'e la timoteios.i mi xabju le sralygu'e.
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> i ca'o le cabdei mi pu ctigau la plipe.i la plipe.cu dalpe'o mi.
> i la plipe.cu citka le srasu ni'i la plipe.cu pipyjalra.

Besides inserting "lo nu" as Bruno suggested, another way to fix the gramma=
r is=20
to connect the two bridi with "ini'ibo".

> i mi ze'u ciska dei.i mi ba za'u re'u ciska.
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> mu'o
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> Cher journal,
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> Je m'appelle Timotheos. J'habite en Australie.
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> Aujourd'hui, j'ai nourri Plipe. Plipe est mon animal de compagnie.
> Elle mange de l'herbe parce qu'elle est un criquet.

Moi, je dirais =C2=ABgrillon=C2=BB, mais =C2=ABcriquet=C2=BB est un mot.

> Cela a pris beaucoup de temps =C3=A0 =C3=A9crire. Je vais =C3=A9crire enc=
ore.
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> Dear diary,
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> I am Timotheos. I live in Australia.
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> Today I fed Plipe. Plipe is my pet.
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> She eats grass because she is a grasshopper.
> It took me a very long time to write this. I will write again.

"But you eat all these reptile birds that walk on four and have knees highe=
r=20
than their legs to jump."

grasshopper=3Dsauterelle=3Dpipyjalra, cricket=3Dgrillon=3Dsagjalra; but I d=
on't like=20
"jalra" used to refer to Orthoptera because they're not closely related. Th=
e=20
cockroaches and termites are now placed in the same order, so I have no=20
problem with "mudyctijalra" (which could also refer to the wood-eating=20
cockroach that isn't a termite), but the Orthoptera are outside the=20
Dictyoptera. And what do we call katydids (which are not in the family=20
Katydidae)? What sort of orthopteran does "xargolu" mean?

Pierre
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loi mintu se ckaji danlu cu jmaji

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