From sentto-44114-14634-1026155142-lojban-in=lojban.org@returns.groups.yahoo.com Mon Jul 08 12:06:14 2002 Received: with ECARTIS (v1.0.0; list lojban-list); Mon, 08 Jul 2002 12:06:14 z (PDT) Received: from n4.grp.scd.yahoo.com ([66.218.66.88]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with smtp (Exim 4.05) id 17Rdpt-0000tl-00 for lojban-in@lojban.org; Mon, 08 Jul 2002 12:06:13 -0700 X-eGroups-Return: sentto-44114-14634-1026155142-lojban-in=lojban.org@returns.groups.yahoo.com Received: from [66.218.67.200] by n4.grp.scd.yahoo.com with NNFMP; 08 Jul 2002 19:05:42 -0000 X-Sender: slobin@ice.ru X-Apparently-To: lojban@yahoogroups.com Received: (EGP: mail-8_0_7_4); 8 Jul 2002 19:05:41 -0000 Received: (qmail 75814 invoked from network); 8 Jul 2002 19:05:41 -0000 Received: from unknown (66.218.66.216) by m8.grp.scd.yahoo.com with QMQP; 8 Jul 2002 19:05:41 -0000 Received: from unknown (HELO party.ice.ru) (193.110.4.62) by mta1.grp.scd.yahoo.com with SMTP; 8 Jul 2002 19:05:40 -0000 Received: from localhost (slobin@localhost) by party.ice.ru (8.9.3/8.9.3/Debian 8.9.3-21) with ESMTP id XAA30402 for ; Mon, 8 Jul 2002 23:05:38 +0400 X-Authentication-Warning: party.lan.ice.ru: slobin owned process doing -bs X-Sender: To: In-Reply-To: Message-ID: From: Cyril Slobin X-Yahoo-Profile: slobinru MIME-Version: 1.0 Mailing-List: list lojban@yahoogroups.com; contact lojban-owner@yahoogroups.com Delivered-To: mailing list lojban@yahoogroups.com Precedence: bulk Date: Mon, 8 Jul 2002 23:05:38 +0400 (MSD) Subject: Re: [lojban] Just a short story Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII X-archive-position: 164 X-ecartis-version: Ecartis v1.0.0 Sender: lojban-list-bounce@lojban.org Errors-to: lojban-list-bounce@lojban.org X-original-sender: slobin@ice.ru Precedence: bulk Reply-to: lojban-list@lojban.org X-list: lojban-list On Sun, 7 Jul 2002, Jorge Llambias wrote: > >.i mi pu jinvi le du'u lo botpi pe la campan na ka'e porpi > >.i xu mi pinxe du'e da > > Very nice! I suggest {pidu'e da} (too much of something) > instead of {du'e da} (too many things) in the last line. Yes, it would be better. And {lei vanju} instead of {le vanju} in the very first line. -- Cyril Slobin ------------------------ Yahoo! Groups Sponsor ---------------------~--> Free $5 Love Reading Risk Free! http://us.click.yahoo.com/Pp91HA/PfREAA/Ey.GAA/GSaulB/TM ---------------------------------------------------------------------~-> To unsubscribe, send mail to lojban-unsubscribe@onelist.com Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/