From sentto-44114-16206-1033255554-lojban-in=lojban.org@returns.groups.yahoo.com Sat Sep 28 16:29:21 2002 Received: with ECARTIS (v1.0.0; list lojban-list); Sat, 28 Sep 2002 16:29:21 -0700 (PDT) Received: from n29.grp.scd.yahoo.com ([66.218.66.85]) by digitalkingdom.org with smtp (Exim 4.05) id 17vR1T-0000cw-01 for lojban-in@lojban.org; Sat, 28 Sep 2002 16:29:19 -0700 X-eGroups-Return: sentto-44114-16206-1033255554-lojban-in=lojban.org@returns.groups.yahoo.com Received: from [66.218.67.201] by n29.grp.scd.yahoo.com with NNFMP; 28 Sep 2002 23:25:55 -0000 X-Sender: jjllambias@hotmail.com X-Apparently-To: lojban@yahoogroups.com Received: (EGP: mail-8_1_1_4); 28 Sep 2002 23:25:54 -0000 Received: (qmail 84828 invoked from network); 28 Sep 2002 23:25:54 -0000 Received: from unknown (66.218.66.218) by m9.grp.scd.yahoo.com with QMQP; 28 Sep 2002 23:25:54 -0000 Received: from unknown (HELO hotmail.com) (216.33.241.133) by mta3.grp.scd.yahoo.com with SMTP; 28 Sep 2002 23:25:55 -0000 Received: from mail pickup service by hotmail.com with Microsoft SMTPSVC; Sat, 28 Sep 2002 16:25:55 -0700 Received: from 200.69.6.55 by lw8fd.law8.hotmail.msn.com with HTTP; Sat, 28 Sep 2002 23:25:54 GMT To: lojban@yahoogroups.com Bcc: Message-ID: X-OriginalArrivalTime: 28 Sep 2002 23:25:55.0519 (UTC) FILETIME=[64BBB4F0:01C26746] From: "Jorge Llambias" X-Originating-IP: [200.69.6.55] X-Yahoo-Profile: jjllambias2000 MIME-Version: 1.0 Mailing-List: list lojban@yahoogroups.com; contact lojban-owner@yahoogroups.com Delivered-To: mailing list lojban@yahoogroups.com Precedence: bulk Date: Sat, 28 Sep 2002 23:25:54 +0000 Subject: [lojban] Re: MELBI COI Content-Type: text/plain X-archive-position: 1694 X-ecartis-version: Ecartis v1.0.0 Sender: lojban-list-bounce@lojban.org Errors-to: lojban-list-bounce@lojban.org X-original-sender: jjllambias@hotmail.com Precedence: bulk Reply-to: lojban-list@lojban.org X-list: lojban-list Bellissimo! ki'e doi and >i ti xrula lo xarnyfapro >doi melbi coi melbi coi melbi coi coi coi >i ti xrula lo xarnyfapro >poi mroselfu le kamzifre > >- all improvements welcomed. I particularly struggled with trying to find >ways to avoid ending lines (fourth lines) on a trochee -- "poi mroselfu >le kam zifre" is particularly annoying; It seems to be the only little problem. How about {poi nunzifre mroselfu io}? (nunzifre seems like something worth more dying for than kamzifre.) >it would be nice if Lojban song >allowed elision of the final vowel of a gismu. That's Esperanto... :) >"fe mi litru" ought to be >"mo'i zo'a mi litru"; I considered "i le be mo'i zo'a mi litru" as an >alternative. Yes, but {pe} instead of {be} to be grammatical. I like {fe mi litru} though. mu'o mi'e xorxes _________________________________________________________________ Join the world’s largest e-mail service with MSN Hotmail. http://www.hotmail.com ------------------------ Yahoo! Groups Sponsor ---------------------~--> Plan to Sell a Home? http://us.click.yahoo.com/J2SnNA/y.lEAA/MVfIAA/GSaulB/TM ---------------------------------------------------------------------~-> To unsubscribe, send mail to lojban-unsubscribe@onelist.com Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/