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From: jordi mas <jordimastrullenque@yahoo.com>
Subject: [lojban] Re: Alliterative verse try
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> > DANsu le DAmryzgi || fa le ga'arDANti
> > bai le nu le DEGji || cu gityDEsku
> > i pu TRAti gi'e ca TCEna || fa le TAbrysna
> > ce'o batyTUNta || poi KANsa le snosliTO'a
> 
> I have not the skill to comment usefully on
> alliterative verse, but
> it looks pretty cool to me.

Forgot to say, I too lack 
alliterative verse criticism skills,
but I've read the poem aloud
and IMHO that TCE does not seem
to sound like anything else in the
same line, to my ears I mean. No doubt 
native lojban speakers might be of 
a different opinion, eventually.

--jordi
 


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