Return-Path: Message-Id: <9110231914.AA06150@relay1.UU.NET> Date: Thu Oct 24 12:26:56 1991 Reply-To: "61510::GILSON" Sender: Lojban list From: "61510::GILSON" Subject: Mini-lesson X-To: lojban To: John Cowan , Eric Raymond , Eric Tiedemann Status: RO X-From-Space-Date: Thu Oct 24 12:26:56 1991 X-From-Space-Address: cbmvax!uunet!CUVMA.BITNET!LOJBAN In general, I found the mini-lesson to be well written. There are a couple of things I'd take issue with, but these are minor points: (1) For the same reason you went to short-e as an example of the "e" sound, you need to change the example for "o." English speakers seeing that example will make it "ou," which you don't want. (2) Perhaps it's there and I missed it, but I'm still not quite sure of the definition of a sumti. Is it the _slot_, or the word/expression that fills the slot? Bruce