Date: Mon, 4 Jan 93 11:47:59 -0500
From: lojbab@grebyn.com (Logical Language Group)
Message-Id: <9301041647.AA11486@daily.grebyn.com>
To: i_alexander_bra0122@oasis.icl.co.uk, nsn@mullian.ee.mu.oz.au
Subject: Lojban text for JL17
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I am sending to you two what I've prepared of your text for JL: Iain's
2 pieces and Nick's 1st for the coffeehouse.  I am also sending the parser
and glosser output for each, using the latest parser.
I have made only a couple of very minor changes: correcting 2 malformed
lujvo of Nicks, and one grammar problem in Iain's work, which is described
in my commentary.  Nick also has an extraneous hyphen in his 'Tasty-Tea'
name, which he may want taken out, but my policy at this point is to make
minimal changes unless directed by the author or editor de jour for the piece,
and we have none of the latter.
I've included what I thought were the most worthwhile/general interest of
comments made by reviewers in passing, and added in my own commentary on 
some issues (which will be new to you).  I haven't actually read the texts
in any depth, except for a portion of Nick's that we went over on Tuesday night
session, for which he already got comments.  Thus, there might be more things
that I haven't caught.

I may make more changes to the commentary before publishing, and there is
still time to make text changes, but you have to be specific on the change
rather than just resend a revised text, since the stuff being sent to you
has already been incorporated into JL, and it is a pain to replace and
reformat with new stuff as opposed to merely editing it.

lojbab