Return-Path: <@FINHUTC.HUT.FI:LOJBAN@CUVMB.BITNET> Received: from FINHUTC.hut.fi by xiron.pc.helsinki.fi with smtp (Linux Smail3.1.28.1 #1) id m0rDTfN-00007FC; Fri, 2 Dec 94 10:48 EET Message-Id: Received: from FINHUTC.HUT.FI by FINHUTC.hut.fi (IBM VM SMTP V2R2) with BSMTP id 0097; Fri, 02 Dec 94 10:48:45 EET Received: from SEARN.SUNET.SE (NJE origin MAILER@SEARN) by FINHUTC.HUT.FI (LMail V1.1d/1.7f) with BSMTP id 0093; Fri, 2 Dec 1994 10:48:45 +0200 Received: from SEARN.SUNET.SE (NJE origin LISTSERV@SEARN) by SEARN.SUNET.SE (LMail V1.2a/1.8a) with BSMTP id 5316; Fri, 2 Dec 1994 09:45:14 +0100 Date: Thu, 1 Dec 1994 17:36:12 -0500 Reply-To: Logical Language Group Sender: Lojban list From: Logical Language Group Subject: Re: TEXT: pemci To: lojban@cuvmb.cc.columbia.edu In-Reply-To: <199412010342.AA18537@nfs1.digex.net> from "ucleaar" at Dec 1, 94 01:37:05 am Content-Length: 475 Lines: 13 > lo ni fa le vi nanmu cu pinji > vau bancu le lakne zei linji > .i zmabra .i gohu > cu mukti .oirohu > le spepli be lo cmadesminji In addition to the bugs pointed out by Goran, I would add that "go'u" is no sumti; you want "le nu go'u" or maybe "de'u" (so either meter or rhyme is lost). Otherwise the poem isn't grammatical. -- John Cowan sharing account for now e'osai ko sarji la lojban.