From jjllambias2000@yahoo.com.ar Tue Nov 18 17:44:35 2003 Return-Path: X-Sender: lojban-out@lojban.org X-Apparently-To: lojban@yahoogroups.com Received: (qmail 65890 invoked from network); 19 Nov 2003 01:44:34 -0000 Received: from unknown (66.218.66.217) by m4.grp.scd.yahoo.com with QMQP; 19 Nov 2003 01:44:34 -0000 Received: from unknown (HELO chain.digitalkingdom.org) (64.81.49.134) by mta2.grp.scd.yahoo.com with SMTP; 19 Nov 2003 01:44:34 -0000 Received: from lojban-out by chain.digitalkingdom.org with local (Exim 4.22) id 1AMHLv-0005Ys-4n for lojban@yahoogroups.com; Tue, 18 Nov 2003 17:41:55 -0800 Received: from chain.digitalkingdom.org ([64.81.49.134]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.22) id 1AMHLS-0005YM-35; Tue, 18 Nov 2003 17:41:26 -0800 Received: with ECARTIS (v1.0.0; list lojban-list); Tue, 18 Nov 2003 17:41:15 -0800 (PST) Received: from web41904.mail.yahoo.com ([66.218.93.155]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with smtp (Exim 4.22) id 1AMHLD-0005Xv-1A for lojban-list@lojban.org; Tue, 18 Nov 2003 17:41:11 -0800 Message-ID: <20031119014318.93830.qmail@web41904.mail.yahoo.com> Received: from [200.69.6.24] by web41904.mail.yahoo.com via HTTP; Tue, 18 Nov 2003 17:43:18 PST Date: Tue, 18 Nov 2003 17:43:18 -0800 (PST) Subject: [lojban] Re: "Tintin - L'Ile Noire" in Lojban, next step. I need your help! In-Reply-To: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii X-archive-position: 6733 X-ecartis-version: Ecartis v1.0.0 Sender: lojban-list-bounce@lojban.org Errors-to: lojban-list-bounce@lojban.org X-original-sender: jjllambias2000@yahoo.com.ar X-list: lojban-list To: lojban@yahoogroups.com From: Jorge "Llambías" Reply-To: jjllambias2000@yahoo.com.ar X-Originating-IP: 64.81.49.134 X-Yahoo-Group-Post: member; u=142311107 X-Yahoo-Profile: jjllambias2000 X-Yahoo-Message-Num: 21214 --- Jérôme_Desquilbet wrote: > 1) For the translation example, I would suggest a page with more text > than the average. Page 42 for example is a verbose one (same page > number in my French and Esperanto versions; I don't have an English > version yet). Here is a first stab at it. Suggestions for improvement are welcome: 1. la tintin: do mi tavla le mo danlu i xu le malda'u pe la loxnes le skoto: ko na cisma doi citno i mi do tavla le danlu poi xabju bu'u la xekri daplu le fesydi'u be le balzda be la benmor i dy citka ro da poi dusydarsi lo nu klama xydy 2. le skoto: i mu'a pu za lo masti be li ci mu'inai ro se stidi be mi'a le re citno cu jdice lo du'u klama xydy i cy klama fu lo bloti i le xamsi cu cando i lo kantu ji'asai na brife i sa'u baku noroi tirna lo nuzba be cy i ca le purlamna'a le fipkalte pe la kiltox cu canci 3. le skoto: i caku denmi bumru i la mak gregor uu i la'a ri srera klama xydy i noroi za'ure'u viska ra i ca le purpurlamna'a y i ku'i va'o gi mi do tavla ro da poi canci gi mi noroi ba sisti 4. le skoto: i oi selterpa danlu i su'oroiku ca lo vanci ca lo nu brife le darno xamsi cu tirna lo nu dy ... i a'e ko tirna 5. : BUM BUM 6. le barpre: ti vanci sanmi doi do'u la tintin: ki'e i mutce cizra i ai ca le bavlamdei mi klama la xekri daplu 7. : ca le bavlamdei la tintin: pe'udo'u xu do mi bevri la xekri daplu le pamoi nanmu: ue la xekri daplu i xu do djica lo nu klama la xekri daplu i xu do tatpi lo nu jmive 8. le remoi nanmu: ue xu bevri do la xekri daplu i na go'i va'o ji'asai lo nu pleji ro solji pe le munje i mi prami lo nu jmive doi citno 9. le cimoi nanmu: ue xu la xekri daplu i e'u ko nalsta le se platu i je'u noda ba djica lo nu bevri do xydy 10. la tintin: ua 11. la tintin: ju'i i xu do zanru lo nu zasyve'u le bloti mi le vomoi nanmu: go'i i ku'i xu do se slabu lo nu sazri by ta'i makau 12. le vomoi nanmu: i do platu lo nu klama ma la tintin: mi platu lo nu vitke le balzda be la benmor 13. le vomoi nanmu: ue xu la xekri daplu i ua ienai i do na ba xruti i mi ba cirko le bloti la tintin: i'apei do by mi vecnu 14. la tintin: uo 15. le skoto: lo jmina poi mi'o na za'ure'u viska ------------- mu'o mi'e xorxes __________________________________ Do you Yahoo!? Protect your identity with Yahoo! Mail AddressGuard http://antispam.yahoo.com/whatsnewfree