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On Monday 10 November 2003 18:27, jexOm. wrote:
> Hello,
> I put at http://jerome.desquilbet.org/pages/246/ a copy of an article I
> have written for fun. It was for an internal newsletter in my company.
> I have taken inputs from many pieces of materials available in many
> places. I hope there are not too many mistakes. I don't know if new
> people will be interested in lojban after reading it, I hope so. Of
> course, I will welcome any comment, and will fix broken things.
> Thanks,
>    J=E9r=F4me.

Your use of the place structure of {dunda} is inconsistent. Also, you might=
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add some of the gismu derivations; e.g. {barda} is Hindi "bar" (I don't kno=
w=20
the actual Hindi spelling) + Chinese "da", with overtones of "large" and=20
"kabir" (or "akbar", but "kabir" is the form listed in the voc file); "bong=
u"=20
is English "bone" + Chinese "gu". Other than that, it's great!

phma
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.i toljundi do .ibabo mi'afra tu'a do
.ibabo damba do .ibabo do jinga
.icu'u la ma'atman.