From lojban-out@lojban.org Wed Nov 24 02:55:56 2004 Return-Path: X-Sender: lojban-out@lojban.org X-Apparently-To: lojban@yahoogroups.com Received: (qmail 15236 invoked from network); 24 Nov 2004 10:55:55 -0000 Received: from unknown (66.218.66.167) by m25.grp.scd.yahoo.com with QMQP; 24 Nov 2004 10:55:55 -0000 Received: from unknown (HELO chain.digitalkingdom.org) (64.81.49.134) by mta6.grp.scd.yahoo.com with SMTP; 24 Nov 2004 10:55:55 -0000 Received: from lojban-out by chain.digitalkingdom.org with local (Exim 4.34) id 1CWuoT-0003mH-6P for lojban@yahoogroups.com; Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:55:53 -0800 Received: from chain.digitalkingdom.org ([64.81.49.134]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.34) id 1CWunj-0003lb-3R; Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:55:07 -0800 Received: with ECARTIS (v1.0.0; list lojban-list); Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:55:03 -0800 (PST) Received: from web51609.mail.yahoo.com ([206.190.38.214]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with smtp (Exim 4.34) id 1CWunR-0003lJ-F3 for lojban-list@lojban.org; Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:54:49 -0800 Received: (qmail 71984 invoked by uid 60001); 24 Nov 2004 10:54:18 -0000 Comment: DomainKeys? See http://antispam.yahoo.com/domainkeys DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; q=dns; c=nofws; s=s1024; d=yahoo.com; b=TJj/pEGP2PdIeSiwhxRRm5jwl6jEG1lplDwiY7eLNcs91z83iCV+cpfP6dz0gW3bk1UnGuN92MVpcnNX3VcCwOC1hbweAHqYcPm/DkyQixlfnFGXiqcGG06QZhCdwBFBHNsZp5LrS5KYc43U6nrJ6VCyznNkRC5POR7Vii6Q2jM= ; Message-ID: <20041124105418.71982.qmail@web51609.mail.yahoo.com> Received: from [212.78.155.134] by web51609.mail.yahoo.com via HTTP; Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:54:17 PST Date: Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:54:17 -0800 (PST) In-Reply-To: <20041124083223.GC25791@chain.digitalkingdom.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii X-archive-position: 9044 X-ecartis-version: Ecartis v1.0.0 Sender: lojban-list-bounce@lojban.org Errors-to: lojban-list-bounce@lojban.org X-original-sender: jordimastrullenque@yahoo.com X-list: lojban-list To: lojban@yahoogroups.com X-eGroups-Remote-IP: 64.81.49.134 X-eGroups-From: jordi mas From: jordi mas Reply-To: jordimastrullenque@yahoo.com Subject: [lojban] Re: Alliterative verse try X-Yahoo-Group-Post: member; u=116389790 X-Yahoo-Profile: lojban_out X-Yahoo-Message-Num: 23447 > > DANsu le DAmryzgi || fa le ga'arDANti > > bai le nu le DEGji || cu gityDEsku > > i pu TRAti gi'e ca TCEna || fa le TAbrysna > > ce'o batyTUNta || poi KANsa le snosliTO'a > > I have not the skill to comment usefully on > alliterative verse, but > it looks pretty cool to me. Forgot to say, I too lack alliterative verse criticism skills, but I've read the poem aloud and IMHO that TCE does not seem to sound like anything else in the same line, to my ears I mean. No doubt native lojban speakers might be of a different opinion, eventually. --jordi ===== __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around http://mail.yahoo.com