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Subject: Alliterative verse try
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Here's my first try on an alliterative verse in Lojban.

DANsu le DAmryzgi || fa le ga'arDANti
bai le nu le DEGji || cu gityDEsku
i pu TRAti gi'e ca TCEna || fa le TAbrysna
ce'o batyTUNta || poi KANsa le snosliTO'a

dancing to the drum-music || throwing-sticks
forced by fingers' || string-shaking
strained now stretching || trumpet-sound
and then biting-stabs || together with low-tone

mi'e sanxiyn.