From lojban-out@lojban.org Fri Apr 15 12:57:03 2005 Return-Path: X-Sender: lojban-out@lojban.org X-Apparently-To: lojban@yahoogroups.com Received: (qmail 3963 invoked from network); 15 Apr 2005 19:57:02 -0000 Received: from unknown (66.218.66.172) by m21.grp.scd.yahoo.com with QMQP; 15 Apr 2005 19:57:02 -0000 Received: from unknown (HELO chain.digitalkingdom.org) (64.81.49.134) by mta4.grp.scd.yahoo.com with SMTP; 15 Apr 2005 19:57:02 -0000 Received: from lojban-out by chain.digitalkingdom.org with local (Exim 4.50) id 1DMWw2-000296-Ls for lojban@yahoogroups.com; Fri, 15 Apr 2005 12:57:02 -0700 Received: from chain.digitalkingdom.org ([64.81.49.134]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.50) id 1DMWvn-00028W-9Y; Fri, 15 Apr 2005 12:56:50 -0700 Received: with ECARTIS (v1.0.0; list lojban-list); Fri, 15 Apr 2005 12:56:41 -0700 (PDT) Received: from nobody by chain.digitalkingdom.org with local (Exim 4.50) id 1DMWvZ-00028M-W6 for lojban-list-real@lojban.org; Fri, 15 Apr 2005 12:56:34 -0700 Received: from wproxy.gmail.com ([64.233.184.204]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.50) id 1DMWvW-00027c-NX for lojban-list@lojban.org; Fri, 15 Apr 2005 12:56:33 -0700 Received: by wproxy.gmail.com with SMTP id 68so898879wri for ; Fri, 15 Apr 2005 12:55:59 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.54.32.51 with SMTP id f51mr118805wrf; Fri, 15 Apr 2005 12:55:59 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.54.69.3 with HTTP; Fri, 15 Apr 2005 12:55:59 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <925d175605041512551ca0b8a3@mail.gmail.com> Date: Fri, 15 Apr 2005 16:55:59 -0300 In-Reply-To: <20050415193816.GG13636@chain.digitalkingdom.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-MIME-Autoconverted: from quoted-printable to 8bit by Ecartis Content-Disposition: inline References: <20050414194642.GR15911@chain.digitalkingdom.org> <20050414201420.GT15911@chain.digitalkingdom.org> <20050415193816.GG13636@chain.digitalkingdom.org> X-Spam-Score: -2.5 (--) X-archive-position: 9840 X-ecartis-version: Ecartis v1.0.0 Errors-to: lojban-list-bounce@lojban.org X-original-sender: jjllambias@gmail.com X-list: lojban-list X-Spam-Score: -2.5 (--) To: lojban@yahoogroups.com X-Originating-IP: 64.81.49.134 X-eGroups-Msg-Info: 1:12:0 X-eGroups-From: =?ISO-8859-1?Q?Jorge_Llamb=EDas?= From: =?ISO-8859-1?Q?Jorge_Llamb=EDas?= Reply-To: jjllambias@gmail.com Subject: [lojban] Re: {zdile} mi na nelci zo bai X-Yahoo-Group-Post: member; u=116389790 X-Yahoo-Profile: lojban_out X-Yahoo-Message-Num: 24197 On 4/15/05, Robin Lee Powell wrote: > No response at all? I was expecting at least a giggle from xorxes. > Or ARJ. :-) It was quite funny, but I have several objections :) 1- it doesn't parse (three sentences without separation). 2- {kai} should tag something with a property, not a property. "it's also the only one I've seen that maintains rhyme and meter throughout" 3- it doesn't exactly maintain rhyme and meter. Syllable counts are 6-6-9 5-5-9 5-5-9, and do you want to stress "ZO doi E zo CAI" to match "TCEtce GLEki SAI"? Also {REMpai} doesn't rhyme with the others, at least not with my understanding of rhymes. 4- you should have seen, for example among others. :) mu'o mi'e xorxes