From lojban-out@lojban.org Tue Feb 21 15:22:30 2006 Return-Path: X-Sender: lojban-out@lojban.org X-Apparently-To: lojban@yahoogroups.com Received: (qmail 32788 invoked from network); 21 Feb 2006 23:22:29 -0000 Received: from unknown (66.218.67.36) by m31.grp.scd.yahoo.com with QMQP; 21 Feb 2006 23:22:29 -0000 Received: from unknown (HELO chain.digitalkingdom.org) (64.81.49.134) by mta10.grp.scd.yahoo.com with SMTP; 21 Feb 2006 23:22:28 -0000 Received: from lojban-out by chain.digitalkingdom.org with local (Exim 4.60) (envelope-from ) id 1FBgpt-0007jU-Ac for lojban@yahoogroups.com; Tue, 21 Feb 2006 15:22:25 -0800 Received: from chain.digitalkingdom.org ([64.81.49.134]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.60) (envelope-from ) id 1FBgo6-0007iO-10; Tue, 21 Feb 2006 15:20:34 -0800 Received: with ECARTIS (v1.0.0; list lojban-list); Tue, 21 Feb 2006 15:20:25 -0800 (PST) Received: from nobody by chain.digitalkingdom.org with local (Exim 4.60) (envelope-from ) id 1FBgnb-0007dF-PO for lojban-list-real@lojban.org; Tue, 21 Feb 2006 15:20:03 -0800 Received: from web36509.mail.mud.yahoo.com ([209.191.85.9]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with smtp (Exim 4.60) (envelope-from ) id 1FBgna-0007ck-IU for lojban-list@lojban.org; Tue, 21 Feb 2006 15:20:03 -0800 Received: (qmail 25895 invoked by uid 60001); 21 Feb 2006 23:19:59 -0000 Message-ID: <20060221231959.25893.qmail@web36509.mail.mud.yahoo.com> Received: from [69.205.36.41] by web36509.mail.mud.yahoo.com via HTTP; Tue, 21 Feb 2006 15:19:59 PST Date: Tue, 21 Feb 2006 15:19:59 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Spam-Score: -1.0 (-) X-archive-position: 11127 X-ecartis-version: Ecartis v1.0.0 Errors-to: lojban-list-bounce@lojban.org X-original-sender: gtrpkt@yahoo.com X-list: lojban-list X-Spam-Score: -1.0 (-) To: lojban@yahoogroups.com X-Originating-IP: 64.81.49.134 X-eGroups-Msg-Info: 1:12:0:0 X-eGroups-From: Andrew Heathwaite From: Andrew Heathwaite Reply-To: gtrpkt@yahoo.com Subject: [lojban] coi / gramr corections plese? X-Yahoo-Group-Post: member; u=116389790; y=d4YsmX5KzUFTGAgHqIEt4ZRRE85KYL0bMl2uEHSoAr4skFOmlQ X-Yahoo-Profile: lojban_out X-Yahoo-Message-Num: 25534 .i coi roda mi'e .andros. ...and in English, hi, I'm Andrew. First of all, I hope this is an appropriate request to make on this email list. If not, I hope someone will set me straight. I've been teaching myself Lojban for the past month or so. I've almost completed _Lojban For Beginners_, and I'm planning to buy _The Complete Lojban Language_ sometime in the near future. I'm serious about it; you should see my boxes of flashcards. I've fallen in love with Lojban, and I want to become fluent and write songs in it. I have started an online journal for practicing Lojban, and I was wondering if somebody experienced with the language would be interested in reading over my little writings and offering corrections and suggestions. I know that my stories are pointless and bebna; you don't have to tell me that. I just want to know: (A) Am I using grammar correctly? (B) Does what I'm writing make sense? (C) If not A or not B, what can I do to fix it? I'd appreciate any help of that nature. It's not good for me to practice bad grammar. If I have misconceptions about how things are supposed to work, I'd like to know sooner rather than later. I don't know if this email list is the right place for responses to these questions, since I am new to it. I'd like to suggest that if you have responses to my writings you use the comments feature of my blog. It's easy to do, and you don't have to register. So here is the link to my blog: http://androslojban.blogspot.com/ Thank you so much in advance! .i .io ki'e mu'o __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around http://mail.yahoo.com To unsubscribe from this list, send mail to lojban-list-request@lojban.org with the subject unsubscribe, or go to http://www.lojban.org/lsg2/, or if you're really stuck, send mail to secretary@lojban.org for help.