From lojban-out@lojban.org Sun Feb 26 16:54:04 2006 Return-Path: X-Sender: lojban-out@lojban.org X-Apparently-To: lojban@yahoogroups.com Received: (qmail 56255 invoked from network); 27 Feb 2006 00:54:00 -0000 Received: from unknown (66.218.67.36) by m33.grp.scd.yahoo.com with QMQP; 27 Feb 2006 00:54:00 -0000 Received: from unknown (HELO chain.digitalkingdom.org) (64.81.49.134) by mta10.grp.scd.yahoo.com with SMTP; 27 Feb 2006 00:54:00 -0000 Received: from lojban-out by chain.digitalkingdom.org with local (Exim 4.60) (envelope-from ) id 1FDWeE-0001i8-9u for lojban@yahoogroups.com; Sun, 26 Feb 2006 16:53:58 -0800 Received: from chain.digitalkingdom.org ([64.81.49.134]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.60) (envelope-from ) id 1FDWcr-0001hc-D3; Sun, 26 Feb 2006 16:52:34 -0800 Received: with ECARTIS (v1.0.0; list lojban-list); Sun, 26 Feb 2006 16:52:25 -0800 (PST) Received: from nobody by chain.digitalkingdom.org with local (Exim 4.60) (envelope-from ) id 1FDWcQ-0001hR-Hm for lojban-list-real@lojban.org; Sun, 26 Feb 2006 16:52:06 -0800 Received: from web36513.mail.mud.yahoo.com ([209.191.85.13]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with smtp (Exim 4.60) (envelope-from ) id 1FDWcP-0001hI-CX for lojban-list@lojban.org; Sun, 26 Feb 2006 16:52:06 -0800 Received: (qmail 37984 invoked by uid 60001); 27 Feb 2006 00:52:03 -0000 Message-ID: <20060227005203.37982.qmail@web36513.mail.mud.yahoo.com> Received: from [69.205.36.41] by web36513.mail.mud.yahoo.com via HTTP; Sun, 26 Feb 2006 16:52:03 PST Date: Sun, 26 Feb 2006 16:52:03 -0800 (PST) In-Reply-To: <20060221231959.25893.qmail@web36509.mail.mud.yahoo.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Spam-Score: -1.0 (-) X-archive-position: 11132 X-ecartis-version: Ecartis v1.0.0 Errors-to: lojban-list-bounce@lojban.org X-original-sender: gtrpkt@yahoo.com X-list: lojban-list X-Spam-Score: -1.0 (-) To: lojban@yahoogroups.com X-Originating-IP: 64.81.49.134 X-eGroups-Msg-Info: 1:12:0:0 X-eGroups-From: Andrew Heathwaite From: Andrew Heathwaite Reply-To: gtrpkt@yahoo.com Subject: [lojban] Re: coi / gramr corections plese? X-Yahoo-Group-Post: member; u=116389790; y=yEhEg5e5ZKvHz7FVbdwHSa53Ag7dcLPrraTNA6KKgFPBelqT9g X-Yahoo-Profile: lojban_out X-Yahoo-Message-Num: 25539 Thank you very very much to everyone who posted corrections on my comments page! I understand almost all of them. Maybe when I look closer, I will understand all. When I get the chance, I plan to fix my errors and write new things. Very soon I will order The Complete Lojban Language, and that will help me a lot with continuing my education. Thank you thank you thank you! ki'esai mi'e .andros. --- Andrew Heathwaite wrote: > .i coi roda mi'e .andros. > > ...and in English, hi, I'm Andrew. > > First of all, I hope this is an appropriate request to make on this > email list. If not, I hope someone will set me straight. > > I've been teaching myself Lojban for the past month or so. I've > almost completed _Lojban For Beginners_, and I'm planning to buy > _The > Complete Lojban Language_ sometime in the near future. I'm serious > about it; you should see my boxes of flashcards. I've fallen in > love > with Lojban, and I want to become fluent and write songs in it. I > have started an online journal for practicing Lojban, and I was > wondering if somebody experienced with the language would be > interested in reading over my little writings and offering > corrections and suggestions. > > I know that my stories are pointless and bebna; you don't have to > tell me that. I just want to know: > > (A) Am I using grammar correctly? > (B) Does what I'm writing make sense? > (C) If not A or not B, what can I do to fix it? > > I'd appreciate any help of that nature. It's not good for me to > practice bad grammar. If I have misconceptions about how things > are > supposed to work, I'd like to know sooner rather than later. > > I don't know if this email list is the right place for responses to > these questions, since I am new to it. I'd like to suggest that if > you have responses to my writings you use the comments feature of > my > blog. It's easy to do, and you don't have to register. > > So here is the link to my blog: > > http://androslojban.blogspot.com/ > > Thank you so much in advance! > > .i .io ki'e mu'o > > __________________________________________________ > Do You Yahoo!? > Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around > http://mail.yahoo.com > > > To unsubscribe from this list, send mail to > lojban-list-request@lojban.org > with the subject unsubscribe, or go to http://www.lojban.org/lsg2/, > or if > you're really stuck, send mail to secretary@lojban.org for help. > > __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired of spam? Yahoo! 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