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Subject: [lojban] Re: First attempt to translate Chinese poem...
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It appears all right to me, except for the {vau} in the first line:
you don't need it if I'm not mistaken.
And I would have written {le catlu prenu} instead of {le prenu
poi ca catlu} which is a little complicated.

mi'e darves
           
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<div>It appears&nbsp;all right&nbsp;to me, except for the {vau} in the first line:</div>
<div>you don't need it if I'm not mistaken.</div>
<div>And I would have written {le catlu prenu} instead of {le prenu</div>
<div>poi ca catlu} which is&nbsp;a little&nbsp;complicated.</div>
<div>&nbsp;</div>
<div>mi'e darves</div>
           
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