From lojban+bncCICntNPQBRChjebjBBoEqMz6Ug@googlegroups.com Sat Aug 28 14:59:27 2010 Received: from mail-gx0-f189.google.com ([209.85.161.189]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1OpTQe-0005Kz-J3; Sat, 28 Aug 2010 14:59:27 -0700 Received: by gxk9 with SMTP id 9sf6957516gxk.16 for ; Sat, 28 Aug 2010 14:59:06 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:x-beenthere:received:mime-version :received:received:date:in-reply-to:x-ip:references:user-agent :x-http-useragent:message-id:subject:from:to:x-original-sender :reply-to:precedence:mailing-list:list-id:list-post:list-help :list-archive:sender:list-subscribe:list-unsubscribe:content-type; bh=KyOBNra0d3VsyWJ74V86qBP0gwGR+mlL1kSXAEShS7Y=; b=3xBv1L7/3urMfHV3dKv+rDO3PVt53aUluqxC8jUnPfuceD0qFV9VtDKYdA9LJAXVlm Tpsa/tQf5F20nQkrGwFXCPghh4ufAHjQOB6xfws6wiCowtagpGJEPuDHqmu4TnUkBtFM SqjLdCq9no85I8U1ZtHE7h7apJIEZWB7O3lZI= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=x-beenthere:mime-version:date:in-reply-to:x-ip:references :user-agent:x-http-useragent:message-id:subject:from:to :x-original-sender:reply-to:precedence:mailing-list:list-id :list-post:list-help:list-archive:sender:list-subscribe :list-unsubscribe:content-type; b=LetZ3+Rq5kMhH1XLw7wxrL9azfRAMugTcE8Fp9MMtWMEWfgxRw9Hj16XpLK8tIjrzu STO8u1K15RzJZVACh0CCrrtdU7meiCl5jww4+B/GcBDLn80Uld7nZEDjUSmLHO4FAyax oFqMxkl3zTh4Gteqt3p69n4S4KZy16uw44UtM= Received: by 10.101.133.6 with SMTP id k6mr167204ann.8.1283032737781; Sat, 28 Aug 2010 14:58:57 -0700 (PDT) X-BeenThere: lojban@googlegroups.com Received: by 10.101.146.2 with SMTP id y2ls1531017ann.6.p; Sat, 28 Aug 2010 14:58:56 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.101.117.14 with SMTP id u14mr27439anm.65.1283032736872; Sat, 28 Aug 2010 14:58:56 -0700 (PDT) Received: by h17g2000pri.googlegroups.com with HTTP; Sat, 28 Aug 2010 14:58:56 -0700 (PDT) Date: Sat, 28 Aug 2010 14:58:56 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: <8CD1502F8EF1631-1880-ED16@webmail-m073.sysops.aol.com> X-IP: 166.134.74.84 References: <8CD1502F8EF1631-1880-ED16@webmail-m073.sysops.aol.com> User-Agent: G2/1.0 X-HTTP-UserAgent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; U; Linux i686; en-GB; rv:1.9.2.8) Gecko/20100723 Ubuntu/10.04 (lucid) Firefox/3.6.8,gzip(gfe) Message-ID: <18102c9e-f548-49e4-8fb5-06d1117c46dc@h17g2000pri.googlegroups.com> Subject: [lojban] Religious document translation. From: Lindar To: lojban X-Original-Sender: lindarthebard@yahoo.com Reply-To: lojban@googlegroups.com Precedence: list Mailing-list: list lojban@googlegroups.com; contact lojban+owners@googlegroups.com List-ID: List-Post: , List-Help: , List-Archive: Sender: lojban@googlegroups.com List-Subscribe: , List-Unsubscribe: , Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 RE: Correct e-mail. Yeah, it is. You can also go to http://groups.google.com/group/lojban/ to browse through old threads. RE: Translation. You're missing dotside on your cmevla (whether or not you care is another issue entirely), your grouping is confusing (article 2 "madzeienai" needs denpa bu, article 3 "tadjilo" and article 13 "siskutu'a" you need to either use whitespace or mark emphasis because this breaks apart to {ta djIlo} not {tAdji lo} and {siskUtu'a} not {sIsku tu'a}) and you have a few invalid words (line 4 "lo nunmadxagtik" is not valid), and you have some unnecessary usage of {cu} (on line 8 "la biblos. cu selsku", which actually doesn't make sense, btw). (While we're on the topic, you should never have to use CU, so if it looks like you need it, then you need to not use it and study more instead.) -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "lojban" group. To post to this group, send email to lojban@googlegroups.com. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to lojban+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/lojban?hl=en.